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Zarbon... where've I heard that name before...
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Dragonball
Are you sure we're not seeing author bias here? Plus There are mistakes even in the description of the fic ((the small one)).
6006579 Dragonball. One of Frieza's minions.
6007096 I just watched TFS today! In fact, I heard his name spoken! Dang.
Interesting story. I have the feeling that both Cadance and Shining suspect something about her.
I noticed that there is the main 6 tag so I'm curious that if they visit, Rosinta will also go after Twilight as she is possibly the most powerful unicorn in Equestia and all that magic could be useful, especially if it can be passed on to her children.
For now I'm tracking this story.
6007032 But it also makes logical sense. In that invasion Chrysalis took away the best defense they had. Secrecy. That is bound to have reprecussions on the other hives.
6007213 they don't. She just happened to solve a problem for them.
And now, the wrench
I'm kinda surprised that after their first encounter with changelings, the Equestrians haven't developed some countermeasures. Maybe the ponies are just kinky like that I dunno.
6025149 well Equestria proper has. thus why Rosinta was desperate. that drone had to be real careful in Canterlot. and the Crystal Empire is still adjusting to the lost of over a thousand years.
6024745 not yet.
6026146 One would think Sunbutt would be cautious where her niece is involved, tho. But like I said, Princess of Love... for all we know she's just playing along because it's fun.
(don't take me too seriously )
6026232 Celestia thinks she has it in the bag. SHe found Chrysalis after the wedding and guess who is Sunbutt's new sex slave?
(Joking)
6026389 Or possibly not joking, anyway I have the faint sense that the wrench wil have a name that starts with T.
I hope it's only a minor hiccup.
6068713 oh the wench will not be a T.
don't worry about it kid.
Roseinta "Smooth Operator". also lols for StarCraft reference.
6308367 the reference is completely by accident.
swap of with at
um I don't know how you would fix the first but the last one "shiny is going to be bummed"
I think there was one more but cant find it. This is so not going to end well at some point, still at least shes being subtle.
SPOILERS!
That sex scene was unexpected
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Something was lost, here.
6457299 fixed
6457397 But now you forgot to seperate the dialogue
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6457482 Actually, the seperation should be after "Rarity cheered"
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6457500 Just because I'm enjoying this more than I should, doesn't mean I'm not trying to help
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Oh. My. God. Shining, I think you found yourself a love rival!
6460277 she's willing to share. Both of them will outlive him.
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Yep. Just finished reading it and found that out.
I like the story. It is an interesting idea and I'm already thrilled to see where this goes!
have you noticed you have a spacing problem in places
Cadence seems more astute than our little queen realizes. For instance, she pointedly avoided asking what her "company" normally does.
This sounds like a most benevolent trap....
It's alright, but we need more conflict, when are we ending the honeymoon?
Keep going! ;)
6580428 It will be coming soon. At least part of the next chapter will have the first hint and trust me the honeymoon gets completely destroyed with the first conflict.
6007096 Ah, good old Zarbon.
Hmmm, is there not one Noble in the Empire who is truly noble? Sad. Perhaps our crafty lovedrunk Queen can arrange a stirring of the status quo...
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There is a couple but yes stills will get some shake ups....on both sides
Ahhh but he's not a Noble, he's Royalty as are the sisters
Apparently so much so that you completely miss her what she's (probably) wearing as well as her extra appendages
Well, Murphy has been summoned, let's see what happens