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Admiral Q Ponyform


After seeing huge bursts of power from one universe a Q decides to investigate

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Zarbon... where've I heard that name before...

Chrysalis' dumb attack on Canterlot.

Are you sure we're not seeing author bias here? Plus There are mistakes even in the description of the fic ((the small one)).

6006579 Dragonball. One of Frieza's minions.

6007096 I just watched TFS today! In fact, I heard his name spoken! Dang.

Interesting story. I have the feeling that both Cadance and Shining suspect something about her.
I noticed that there is the main 6 tag so I'm curious that if they visit, Rosinta will also go after Twilight as she is possibly the most powerful unicorn in Equestia and all that magic could be useful, especially if it can be passed on to her children.
For now I'm tracking this story.

6007032 But it also makes logical sense. In that invasion Chrysalis took away the best defense they had. Secrecy. That is bound to have reprecussions on the other hives.

6007213 they don't. She just happened to solve a problem for them.

And now, the wrench

I'm kinda surprised that after their first encounter with changelings, the Equestrians haven't developed some countermeasures. Maybe the ponies are just kinky like that I dunno. :rainbowlaugh:

6025149 well Equestria proper has. thus why Rosinta was desperate. that drone had to be real careful in Canterlot. and the Crystal Empire is still adjusting to the lost of over a thousand years.

6026146 One would think Sunbutt would be cautious where her niece is involved, tho. But like I said, Princess of Love... for all we know she's just playing along because it's fun. :rainbowlaugh:

(don't take me too seriously :twilightsmile:)

6026232 Celestia thinks she has it in the bag. SHe found Chrysalis after the wedding and guess who is Sunbutt's new sex slave? :pinkiehappy:

(Joking)

6026389 Or possibly not joking, anyway I have the faint sense that the wrench wil have a name that starts with T.
I hope it's only a minor hiccup.

6068713 oh the wench will not be a T. :twilightsmile:

Don't worry about kid, have fun with your friends

don't worry about it kid.

Roseinta "Smooth Operator". also lols for StarCraft reference.

6308367 the reference is completely by accident.

sitting and looking of a paper.

swap of with at

but it's is you and the mare I fell in love with. Shiny is going to bummed he missed this

um I don't know how you would fix the first but the last one "shiny is going to be bummed"
I think there was one more but cant find it. This is so not going to end well at some point, still at least shes being subtle.

SPOILERS!
That sex scene was unexpected :rainbowderp:

“Wonderful news! LOOK! Princess Cadance is better than new!” Rarity cheered. Then an orange mare sat up from one of the massage couches and said, “Princess Cadance, so

this is where you've been. I'll have you know this has been the worst welcome I've had in all my years.”

Something was lost, here.

6457397 But now you forgot to seperate the dialogue :rainbowwild:

6457482 Actually, the seperation should be after "Rarity cheered" :rainbowwild::trollestia::scootangel:

6457500 Just because I'm enjoying this more than I should, doesn't mean I'm not trying to help :twilightsmile:

'Oh yes it was a pleasure, but only the start. You will be mine my Sweet Cadance.'

Oh. My. God. Shining, I think you found yourself a love rival! :rainbowlaugh:

6460277 she's willing to share. Both of them will outlive him.

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Yep. Just finished reading it and found that out.

I like the story. It is an interesting idea and I'm already thrilled to see where this goes! :twilightsmile:

have you noticed you have a spacing problem in places

Cadence seems more astute than our little queen realizes. For instance, she pointedly avoided asking what her "company" normally does.
This sounds like a most benevolent trap....

It's alright, but we need more conflict, when are we ending the honeymoon?
Keep going! ;)

6580428 It will be coming soon. At least part of the next chapter will have the first hint and trust me the honeymoon gets completely destroyed with the first conflict.

Comment posted by hive vs machine deleted Aug 31st, 2016

Hmmm, is there not one Noble in the Empire who is truly noble? Sad. Perhaps our crafty lovedrunk Queen can arrange a stirring of the status quo...

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There is a couple but yes stills will get some shake ups....on both sides

“The Prince of the Empire himself. Well this is an honor. I'm Rose Gem a humble tourist.” He actually blushed at the mention of his title. A modest noble, I didn't think they existed outside of the sisters?

Ahhh but he's not a Noble, he's Royalty as are the sisters :trollestia:

Standing there was a tall pink mare with a with a long mane striped in purple, pink, and white. Her eyes were lavender and a smile that was just infectious.

She was beautiful.

Apparently so much so that you completely miss her what she's (probably) wearing as well as her extra appendages :trollestia:

“Good Night my Sweet Cadance.” Rosinta watch over Cadance as she fell asleep and soon decided to join her even though with the love she has she does really need to do so. Everything was going perfectly.

Well, Murphy has been summoned, let's see what happens :eeyup:

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