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Shukumei


Hello. My name is Fate and I'm fictional. That's right. I don't actually exist. But I love living here at Fimfiction and I look forward to meeting you all!

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It's Pinkie's first day as a Pokemon trainer! After she selects her Pokemon from professor Sparkle, she's ready to take on the world!

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FiM and Pkmn, the best of two worlds, I'll read this later on, for sure. :raritywink:

The ending made this story. I probably should have seen it coming, but it was still hilarious.

rofl.

GUMMY used VACANT LOOK.

Pretty awesome but I demand a gym fight and an everfree forest trek. :duck:

Business as usual for Pinkie. :pinkiecrazy:

i.neoseeker.com/mgv/574321-Liege/321/86/21968_artist_csimadmax_comic_gummy_pinkie_pie_pokemon_professor_oak_rainbow_dash.png
Actually, forget my last post, I felt that this needed to be here instead, as it popped into my mind while reading this.

585497

Oh boy, i agree with that one, we want another chapter, please!

Yeah. This was really hard to write. I was trying to avoid any actual descriptions of battles because I couldn't get them to mesh with the big reveal. Anyway it's just a first draft. I may come back and revamp it when I can figure out how to get everything to mesh better.

585617
Yep. Those Pinkie the pokemon trainer comics were my inspiration.

LOLOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

A few errors here and there, but not anything that deterred from how hilarious this fic was. Keep up the good work!

Crossovers are very hard to do.
mixing Pinkie and Pokemon, and its all in her head, was genius. Mad props to you, sir.

I loved this, a lot, the ending may have been the best part but it was the storytelling that led up to it that kept my interest, I hope that you enjoyed writing this because I loved reading it.

This is beautiful.:rainbowlaugh:

You deserve a feature box for this.

You're all too kind. It's just a one-off short. Nothing special. :twilightblush: That being said, BOW DOWN BEFORE ME! YOUR GODDESS DEMANDS ADULATION! Your humble servant. -Shiloh

WTF is this?! I wake up and Shiloh's already written AND posted a new story without me? *Le Sulk* -Tawny

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Ha. Comedy.

I laughed so hard I cried :rainbowlaugh:
Bravo good sir

My lolz, they reach critical mass!

Gummy used Vacant Look!
It's a One-Hit KO!

Wow! this was really funny, but I have one question...
"Are you a Girl? Or Boy?
I've got eyes problems, so shut up."
-Professor Oakly of a random spin-off parody of Pokemon.

586121
We're actually 2 girls sharing an account. seems fitting since we write together.
586097
Vacant Look > Horn Drill.

You single handed managed to tear through what could have been 7 chapters in one chapter

i don't know weather to congratulate you or flick you on the nose and say "no bad writer bad writer"

then again the surprise ending would not go over so well after being so invested

586193
I'm not sure whether to be offended or proud. It was never supposed to be an epic story. Just a short gag fic.

Nice one my friend, pretty funny to see that this is all something Pinkie Pie is imaging. :rainbowlaugh:

586227 You could have dragged this out and then pulled a M. Night Shyamalan on us that would have been fucking hilarious

The professor took a long drink from her mug before responding. “I have good news. We finally got rid of the crazy little thing. And she took the alligator with her.”
:rainbowlaugh:


586253

Damn you beat me to it. XD

I thought that this sucked until I got to the end. Then I realized it was Pinkie's imagination. I just thought you were being lazy.

586378
Yeah. That was the tightrope I had to walk throughout the story. It was really tough. I couldn't figure out how to incorporate any actual battles without blowing the surprise so I had to just gloss over them.

I'm gonna call it now; this looks like it's going to make the feature box. And it is definitely the funniest "PonyMon" fic I've read to date. And I read a lot.

~Signed, InfiniteBrony

586557
From your lips to the mod's ears.

586160 Vacant Look equals Stare/Leer!:pinkiehappy:

I cannot comprehend this fanfiction for the awesomeness has blown my mind out of my head, onto the wall to which it slid down onto the floor and then proceeded to walk off and out the front door.

So yes... I enjoyed it.

-sees title-

POKEMON FUCK YEAH

586065 Oh my gosh! When Chuck Norris finished his thumbs up, my entire screen flashed white. I'm kinda scared now

585617>>586253 Source please?

Also, this fic is awesome. Guess Shy got the better treatment from the three.

587219 I agree we need a source
Oh and btw amazing fic keep it up :pinkiesmile:

Ok. I've decided. If this makes the featured box, I'll submit it to EQD.

587397 It's right under the fifth featured. Might achieve your goal a lot faster then you'd think.

No No No No. WHY!? It's too good for me to say anything bad!

Eighty-odd likes for such a story? That's ridiculous. It needs MOAR! :flutterrage:

This was hilarious. Truly, just hilarious. A couple minor errors, but they didn't detract from it. I love this to pieces. Take this thumb and these moustaches.

5/5 :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

XiF

Dang it! Someone beat me to writing a pseudo-crossover with Don Quixote! Ah well, good story anyhow. Nice work.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Too much? Anyway, you have made what I believe to be one of the funniest fics on this site. You managed to put what some people would've stretched out into a massive story into a little one-shot, still keeping it wonderfully written. Hats off to you. :pinkiehappy:

588057
That. Is. The. BEST feedback I have ever gotten. you spoke right to me there. I was so worried that it was stretched too thin and that it really was better suited to being a longer fic but I was just a hack with no inspiration. (I'm neurotic about this kind of thing) And then you come along and actually praise me for keeping it as what I originally wanted it to be. A short one-off gag fic. Thank you so much. You have no idea what this did to my mood. :heart::pinkiehappy::heart:

Wow. 66 favorites. 46 comments. 579 views. And talk of making the featured box. All under 24 hours of when I sat down to start writing this. You guys sure do know how to make someone feel awesome.

This is awesome. Everyone else pretty much said what I might have said...if I knew how to put Chuck Norris approving. Oh well..this was GREAT!

of all the best things, this is the. best. Possible. THING!!!:raritystarry:

Aaaaaand it's in the feature box. I totally called it.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png


~Signed, InfiniteBrony

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