We all have secrets. For some it's nothing more than having an extra scoop of ice cream after dinner, for other's it's something much more morbid and disturbing. Those who pursue the truth, be warned, sometimes the darkest secrets of certain ponies are best left hidden in the shadows of their silence.
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Oh, this is good. This is real good. I was about to go. "where is gore tag?" Very clever twist at the end. I greatly enjoyed this.
oh dear god that was sacring the hell out of me untill the very end but good job
well that was weird
DEAR GOD YES LOVE. I knew it wasn't going to be murder...kinda wished he would'a bashed AJ over the head with a teapot like in Sweeney Todd when the Spanish dude found out his secret identity. This is definitely getting a favorite and you're getting a watch. <3
Was expecting yet another gory "Big Mac secretly tortures ponies" fic a la Sweet Apple Massacre, glad to see the plot twist at the end.
Pretty well written, too.
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The same could be say about myself, really.
You're sick. I love it.
I start reading the flesh and stuff and I'm like:
HE'S A MURDERER! And then the ending: 
Er...NO! I KNEW THIS ALL ALONG!
I'm... actually kind of sad now.
damn Cupcakes. That fic has twisted my kind- all of our minds- into assuming this was a Gore fic. BUT ITS NOT! I LIKE it!
sounds good, added to watch later list, because I havta take a bath
Strange... I though he was sewing dolls, well better guess next time.
Anyway, nice story.
Ahah.
I was expected his "victims" to be apples and his secret to be that he used Flim and Flam's machine when his family wasn't looking. I knew something was up there.
Did not see the romance novels, though!
Great story
I thought he was a secret rapist. This is a really good fic.
I feel so hipster, reading this before it was featured and being the eleventh thumbs up.
Before reading and seeing tags: This sounds like something evil is going to happen
Before reading, after seeing tags: ... what comedy? Now I'm confused
Read half way through: Different tools and mentions of creativity first thought was artist or sculptor
Done reading: Lol I see what you did there
Well played...
i thought this was gore fic.... but, the twist
, was not expected.
then again, i am half reliefed that this isn't a Sweet Apple Massitcure rip-off, but you did a good job making us think it was.
and again,
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poor mac, I think macxtwilight would work out though
good job though!
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555083 I feel so hipster. Bieng the first to read this and the first to thumbs up and the first to comment. :P
Wait. I just read what i thought was Big Mac brutally slaughtering a helpless pony,
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1. Leave Farm.
2. Go Into mineshaft and Brutally Murder other Pony.
3. ??????
4. Write Romance Novels.
5. Profit!
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Made the mistake of reading some of the comments, so I was expecting the twist at the end. I was guessing that he was painting.
I am confused, but okay.
I did not have the sense of dark that you tagged it to be. I am more for suspense, if such a tag exists. But this one in well played. Comedy gold!
I myself would be in the same state as Big Mac if my friends find out that I write MLP fics.
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Indeed! But I do not have bastard teachers, nope. I have bastard friends. They love digging for secrets, especially mine. But all in all I have hidden it well....for now
This is marked as incomplete. More chapters on the way, I take it?
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You bet
I was worried for a second there but that was a good twist. Not many fics do a MacTwi pairing, even if this was just a hinting at it. I saw that it said it was incomplete, might we expect more of this?
Aww, poor mac, I feel sorry for him
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Eeyup
you had scared the entire story!! then at the end, you completely twisted it around, you got me good, lol nice writing.
i swore this was a completed one-shot, then it becomes a chapter story.
once again,
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but in all seriousness though, good for you.
this is a good story, aside from making Applejack looking like a total bitch.
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Thank you, like I said it's difficult trying to find TwiMac stories. Everyone seems either intent on it being FlutterMac or him being gay and I don't know why. I suppose it's easy to say of his gentle giant nature to pair him with FlutterShy but gay? I don't think his barn door swings both ways if you know what I mean.
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I hope that I manage to do the ship justice, I think I've set myself up for a pretty good continuation here.
The twist was brilliantly executed and I loved it! My only problem is with Applejack. She's being a terrible sister by deliberately outing him. Sure, you can call it payback for hurling abuse at her earlier, but it would be extremely cruel and unsupportive for her to tell everypony about Big Mac's secret. Although it's true this would probably happen with other siblings, I just can't see Applejack being this mean to her brother.
I think Applejack is the evil one here
i thought it was going to be sewing
Great fic! Glad it didn't turn into another Sweet Apple Massacre. Love the idea of Mac and Twilight too.
This is going straight into my favorites
It Took The Night To Believe - Sunn O)))
You really had me going up until the very end, you devious motherfucker.
Take all my twisted jimmies, and mustachesss
Feh, he'd probably be Rarity's favorite author.
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Justice? For all I care you're freaking super hero to me. The villain is Neglect at a very good pairing and it is up to you to defeat him with your posting powers. Good luck!
*gets to the end*
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Well, that is by far the biggest twist I've ever encountered.
That ending was highly unexpected
but no from beginning to end my reactions followed:
Not many people are good at ruffling my johnnies like that.
excellent work, and nicely done on getting in the top five!
Holy shit, finally, a fucking serious fic has been featured.
The cycle has been broken.
Wait, nevermind it's another short as shit 'funny' fic.
Featuring needs to go back to the old version.
556061 Hmmm, last time I checked... the status of this fic wasn't "completed". Could that possibly meen that it's not done yet?!
hehehe, I knew it was a trollfic from the comedey tag, but you had a pretty good thing going. If I thought it was a dark story you probably would have stung me right up until you started using "red ink" as a motif. At that point I knew exactly what was going on XD.
Hell, that was terrifying until the end. Good show, mate.