"When I get old, I am going to be: Rice. Frisco style." - Ed 2004
Twilight and Spike come across a timeline where Diamond dogs now rule over everyone in Equestria.
It's pretty awesome!
That stupid annoying author: I feel like we were forgetting another set of antagonists in the show during that final...not really sure who though.
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Ok, I loved this. Thank you for writing it.
Man, Twilight continues to hold the idiot ball again, basically letting herself get railroaded into being moved around without really finding anything important up until she meets with the Top Dawg.
Yeah, time to leave. Though maybe approaching the DD's in her own timeline might be worth it after Shimmer is dealt with.
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One second to tack on this typo...
Whining.
And Sombra is already bested.
Looks like Twilight learnt that violence isn't the answer; it's the question. The answer is YES!
What just happened?
I started reading this, and then Rover showed up, and then I'm looking at a fish.
Did you drug me?!
The answer really is obvious, set a trap for Starlight. She obviously hasn't come here yet, but it's just a matter of time.
Trixie without horn, harsh.
But yeah interesting, so much different but not in bad or good way just different.
If is so obvious? I'm not sure, culture shock is big thing actually, second there is another Twilight Sparkle + spike in this world, she could just try to do this in her timeline.
On her place I would talk with Celestia/Luna or even Chrysalis (its always some way different perspective)
There is no known time limit for that spell, nothing stops her
I LOVE this! :D
I got bored halfway through the second chapter from watching the characters constantly pass the idiot ball around. Twilight constantly pushing the "you're evil somehow!" angle was idiotic at best and an agenda at worst, and for Rover not to realize that she wasn't the Twilight he knew was just beyond believable.
Rover's "maybe you're drunk" explanation just ignores that dogs have phenomenal olfactory senses, and that even a human could easily smell the booze coming off someone so drunk that they forgot their life history. Spike calling Rover stupid in spite of Rover apparently having gone out of his way to get education for himself and DD pups was just horribly out of character for beings in a multi-species society.
The premise was interesting but the delivery was awful.
6712434 What was the ending?
wait? where is the ending? it just suddenly stopped. thats not an ending thats a Cliff hanger!
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I know, right? I'd expect this from the perpetually meek Fluttershy, but I know Twilight can say "Okay, this is going to sound weird, but I'm not from around here. Where are we, what is this building, and where are our friends?"
I don't get how this timeline came into being. it seem to baseline.
Yeah, the chose is pretty obvious for Twilight. Fix the timeline, and then immediately get to work at making amends with the diamond dogs in your now restored reality. If they were this beneficial to Equestria here, than it should be about the same if you explain to Celestia this particular timeline's pros and cons and go from their on how to approach the dogs.
I didn't like it, everyone seems out of character and function just as mouth-pieces to spout exposition. Chapter 2 drags on for what seems like forever just repeating the same message over and over again, there also tons of needless background here. It doesn't follow any of the normal basis for being an actual alternate universe and seems just like like their current universe with a bunch of fandom cliches and tropes thrown in.
Wow, I kind of wish this was the reality that they ended up with.
6715750 or an invitation for someone to make an epiloge of som kind. ....
The dogs beat Discord...
The same Discord who can remove his own head, turn it into a balloon, and make houses and mountains float... was beaten by dogs...
The Discord who can make Big Mac a faster digger than a dog was beaten by them...
And then they beat Tirek. After he'd sucked up a bunch of magic. The same Tirek who towered over everything and could throw half a mountain...
Mmmm-hmmmmm... one of those dogs must be Krypto the supermutt.