I don't write pony stories. I mainly write about humans or Equestria Girl stories.
MLP: Friendship Is Magic was made so Hasbro can sell a boatload of toys and MLP merchandise. But what were to happen if those toys acts like the toys from Toy Story?
Follow the adventures of Twilight Sparkle and her friends as they tackle the trials and tribulations of being toys and be given a lot of love and attention by a lovely little girl and her family.
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great job this is good
I like this concept...
Toy Unicorn Twilight suddenly has to contend with Toy Alicorn Twilight... similar to Woody vs. Buzz, but with a LOT more ramifications of "favoritism." Woody and Buzz were able to coexist due to being from different genres, but Twilight and Twilight?
I also have a recommendation for you, but I'll do that via PM.
Great start, keep it up
Errors like this are exactly why writers should read over their work before they publish it.
5817554 It should be fixed now. Is there any other errors you like to point out? Seriously, it helps.
But more importantly: what do you think of the story?
Something's up if Alicorn Twilight doesn't recognize her own friends... what's different about her Toy magic that's reversed her memories?
Hopefully Unicorn Twilight's friends can keep her from going Lesson Zero on the new Princess, or something worse...
Great, keep it up
Thoughts the instant I looked at this: "You. Are. A. TOY!"
Another good chapter
Watching their own show, heh. I pity those pony toys. Especially Rainbow Dash.
"Why can't we look like that?"
"I think we look perfectly lovely, dear!"
"But we look so cool in the show!"
"I um, like hair short hair, long hair isn't very safe eep"
"Couldn't you at least had different hair than my hair! We look the same!"
"sorry"
"So what! You're different colors. At least they got your cutie mark right!"
"What's wrong with your cutie mark?"
"The apples ain't red enough!"
"Still, would it have killed them to allow for our hair to be styled?"
"No. You do not want to have brushable hair. Just trust me on this."
(from wastebasket): "WHEN I ESCAPE FROM HERE I AM GOING TO MURDER THE WORLD"
PTS: "My wings are so pretty!"
considering how this fandom is that could change in any time soon