I don't write pony stories. I mainly write about humans or Equestria Girl stories.
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After a hectic time travel loop and saw the strangest things that she'll ever see, Twilight thought she can relax and show her new friend; Starlight Glimmer, around the castle. However, as they were taking the tour, Starlight notice one of the books were flashing. Soon, Twilight realize that her friends from another world was needing her help and try to call for her.
You can consider this to be a prequel to 2nd Weirdest Thing.
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A couple of things:
This actually happened, along with the rest of the Crusaders party, eight episodes previously.
I can assure you that Tirek may be many things, but he is not a minotaur. If you want to know what one looks like, look no further than the dude giving you a thumbs up in my avatar.
Apart from that, and a few spelling errors I noticed, a pretty good story! A nice follow on from your other one, as well. Keep up the good work.
This was painful to read. I couldn't even finish reading it because your atrocious grammar made me physically ill.
You need to learn how to properly use verb tenses. You also have some capitalization and punctuation issues.
Also, Tirek was a centaur, not a minotaur.
Get an editor to rewrite this for you so it's actually readable.
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I've changed it to centaur now.
Not the best written story I've read, but still nice. I'd recommend an editor to take care of the spelling/punctuation/grammatical errors.
Apparently Sunset Shimmer's phone book has autocorrect installed.
Pretty sweet and intense here!
Ehhhhhh, ow. Good idea, works well, just overall narrative is solid.... but the grammar issues and typos make it almost impossible to enjoy reading.
You need an editor, there's some grammar and verb mistakes here that makes this story uncomfortable to read.