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ImNoPony


I don't write pony stories. I mainly write about humans or Equestria Girl stories.

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Twilight had recently downloaded a copy of Undertale and is having a lot of fun playing it. When her friend found out about the game, they became curious and would like to play it to. They will soon realize that each of them have their own experience playing through Undertale.

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Comments ( 38 )

I can't wait to see everyone's reactions to the game - dating skeletons, being a good house guest, being fabulous, and I can't wait till the to genocide route~

MrB

i can't wait for when they get to the Mettaton EX boss fight

I like the concept, but you rather need an editor.

This is perfect! I can't wait to see what kind of ending each character gets. :raritystarry: It would be crazy if someone got the genocide route. :pinkiecrazy:

You seriously need an editor.... but I am looking forward to this! :D

Wow more undertale?
Hah, seem Toby just make a master price after he done making Undertale. But when Play Demo, no one really care. But a Full Version? then Full of many thing came out. Art - Meme - Fanfic - Song - R34 - ESC and the list go on....

For some reason, I am picturing Fluttershy wanting to stay with Toriel the whole time.

(I myself have just started playing bur haven't progressed much)

100% I bet Rainbow kill everyone. we are know Rainbow like to beat every monster. And she not really smart.
6670704
Get out. Sans and Pinkie will be good friend. You know they power.

Okay, tell me if I'm crazy, but I just had the most inspiring idea ever!!:

What if...........after the Rainbooms have completed the game and hopefully enjoyed it, they could randomly perform the song: Path To Genocide: By DAGames if they wanted to?

I just gained this idea right AFTER I've read this ONE chapter.

Although, I don't think Fluttershy, Rarity and AJ are gonna agree.

Great story, but there are a few errors. Like when it's written Like This. The sentence only needs capitals at the start of a name or a sentence.

I'm looking at you, annoying dog joke

Flibbity floo here's your (you)

Dammit, Twilight, you're a terrible friend, you just spoiled one of the bigger twists in the game.

Shibby shabby Here comes the stabby!

6674052 but its a twist that actually sucks.

Reading this story fills me with DETERMINATION!

I can't wait for Flutters to play when Asgore dies to flowey:fluttercry:

a female gout person suddenly appear where the fire ball came from.

.. You meant 'Goat' not Gout. Right?
That's an important distinction to make.

Now normally I'd critisize for a lack of the 'Other' tag. But for a fic were the Rainbooms play one the most popular games that has seemed to spread like wildfire, I can make an acception.

Your spelling and basic grammar really needs work here and there. But it'll be an amusing read, so I'll track.

I'll be really amused if Fluttershy kills Flowey out of rage at his actions and misses the True Pacifist End. Also Rainbow Dash hiding under the bed after the game asks for her soul. And Pinkie getting Sans to do things Sans isn't actually programmed to do.

Is one of them going to try Genocide after Pacifist? If so, Rainbow Dash would probably be the most likely candidate for it.

6802141

Oh god, Pinkie! The Element of Laughter has brought Sans to life! We're all doomed to suffer bad skelepuns forever!

6671092 That is a great idea actually.

6856358 actually Sans and Pinkie doing their thing together would be a fanfic in itself.

6802141 I could see the pinkie pie thing happening.

6671092 Or stronger than you, sans version?

If you wait in the room with the statue long enough, the arrow keys you need to push on the piano will appear.

I really like this idea! Looks like you aren't gonna finish it, but mind if I try my hand at the concept?

7982435 Thanks a million for lending me the concept! I posted it on Archive of Our Own, obviously giving you credit and linking back to here. You can read it here if you're curious (not for shameless advertisement, but so you can make sure you don't have a problem with anything I did).

Twilight was slowly becomes bored.

Do i even need to say what is wrong with this?

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