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I am a Princess Unikitty!

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Months after Chrysalis's attack on Canterlot, Twilight and her friends are turned into changelings. And not just any changelings. Royal changelings. Royal changelings who've now inherited what's left of Chrysalis's swarm.

The cover was suggested by a friend and was made by 0ravensrequiem0

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Comments ( 421 )

This looks promising. Tracking.

Yay! Can't wait to read what happens next. I love changeling transformation fics.

SHIT IS GETTING MORE AND MORE REAL.

I was hoping Dash would zip down and pound one into the ground. That moment of "Are we fighting the queens?" Considering how much she wants to punch something, it's still possible.

Yay! Loved it.

Looking good so far. Changeling fics are my favourite, so I'll have to come back and read the rest :pinkiehappy:

Yay it's not dead! Um could you be a bit quicker this time

Okay when did Chryssy have time to convert the girls?

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Honestly I'm not sure. I don't plan on addressing that since I figured it was a little more important to concentrate on the transformation and the hive. Sorry if I'm disappointing you.

very interesting concept. This could go really well. Equestira dealing with the hive will be very interesting.

Defiantly a interesting story, and it will be interesting to see how the girls will settle there new charges in Equestria. In a hidden hive? The open? And do Changeling Queens breed like bugs and Lau eggs? Wouldn't that screw with there heads.

Very glad to see this story continuing. I am excited to see what comes next.

5832859 She probably started the spell when she realized there was no cure for her.

The new queens and their hive only have until they are seen in public again to get acquainted with the new situation. Or the next disaster that threatens Equestria. Plus, I don't expect all the queens of the other changeling hives to just sit idlely by and allow six former ponies to rule another hive.

5837535 again when did she have time. She was likely in the hive after the wedding and the only time she would have an inkling of losing is the love sheild, again not really time or opprotunity for her to do it. Since not mentioned otherwise the events of the wedding happened exactly the same in both cannon and here so this is a major plot hole that has to be addressed. I'm still reading but I beg the author to addressed this plot hole.

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How do you suggest I address this? Not to be rude, but I don't see how I can squeeze this in. Or even how. As far as I can see, the only one who'd know that kind of info is Chrysalis, and you already know she ain't going to be saying anything to anypony. But I will take your concerns into consideration and hopefully squeeze it in. If you have a suggestion then I wouldn't mind your input.

5837762 Slightly alter the events of the wedding. This is already AU, so if it was me, have it where instead of overpowering Celestia's blast have her roll then blast. And that encounter would scare her enough for the fall back.

Option B. the shield spell isn't what kills her. With her army all but destroyed would also drive her fear and having no royal daughters sneaks into Ponyville and casts on the ponies that nearly defeated her. Then have a hostile hive attack where she is mortally wounded thus leading to current events.

This story is quite interesting. I can not wait to read more.

Now to wait and see if they try to prove themselves or just fortify a position in Equestria and develop anti-changeling spells. I imagine seeing one army after another getting routed would be proof enough to leave them alone.

Celestia and Luna may have bought some time for the ponies of Equestria, but it will be a matter of time before the other changelings queens act. Kormac, and any other changelings that are able, better get the new queens knowledgeable with their new abilities, as well as changeling politics and history ASAP.
One very important question that does need to be answered is can they still use the Elements of Harmony? Once that is established, it will either be very easy, if they can, or very difficult, if they can't, to reveal them to the ponies of Equestria.

This might be a bit awkward for the mane six :scootangel:

Awesome story. Much better than I could have gotten done.

I saw the Three Sisters reference in there.

Interesting. the Mane 6 might have an ally.

So far I'm liking what I'm reading. So far I can see Applejack being the most welcoming. Why? To her, family is extremely important. Once the shock wears off I can see her and the rest of the Apple clan welcoming her "new children" into the family with open hooves. I could be off on this but that's just my belief.

Did not see that last part coming, i like.

That press conference went about as I expected. I really liked the reactions and interactions with the new queens and their 'new subjects'.

5907011 I'm thinking it might be Bellatrix cause she seems like the kind of changeling who would want her children to call her mom and not your highness.

5915043 she's from the first book she's one of Chrysalis' sisters.

5915064 nope. Chryssy in that book only had two Pupa and Cocoon.

Comment posted by HarmonyRain deleted Apr 28th, 2015

5915114 a story called The Three Sisters

5915547 I do like that one as well

the Three Sister reference is the SOul Merge

5915151 oh I was thinking of the book Alternia The Changeling Queen if you haven't heard of it you need to check it out it's amazing and then you'll know who I'm talking about!ヽ( ̄~ ̄ )ノ

5915551 Oh I know that one, but I don't recall anypony named Bellatrix. There was Cocoon, Chrysalis and Pupa (now Purity). And yes I do like Three Sisters.

5915562 I was thinking of a different book called Alternia The Changeling Queen you should check k it out!ヽ( ̄~ ̄ )ノ

5915567 This Alternia the changeling queen wouldn't happen to be Princess Celestia the changeling queen would it? Cause I've been looking it up and that's what I've been getting.

Comment posted by Princess OtakuGeek deleted Apr 28th, 2015

5915604 I've seen that story a few times, but I'm hesitant to read it so I don't.

5915608 you should it's amazingly great and the storyline and telling is Phenomenal!ヽ( ̄~ ̄ )ノ

5915629 Still not completely sure. Maybe in time.

5915636 ok then can you tell me why you're so unsure about reading it?ヽ( ̄~ ̄ )ノ

5915644 I'm not sure. I guess I'm little nervous about how ponies will react to Celestia being changeling or maybe it's something else. I'm not one hundred percent sure.

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