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I like. This has good grammar, a interesting storyline, and a romance. This could go far.
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Thank you!
this is the first time I've read a 'Human in Equestria' fic where Bon Bon wants the human
it's also the first fic with Lyra and Bon Bon I've read where they are not the closest of friends/lovers
I await the next chapter
Great story! Love it so far! Moar plz!
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Thanks other Stan!
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Forgot the name, but there was one with bonbon falling in love with a human who rainbow Dash sorta got to first. She also was living with lyra, but lyra moved out. The whole thing was kind of a downhill story.
So far I'm seeing a short version of the first chapter of xenophilia. I'll keep it on my list to see where it goes.
I say your storyline is pretty good. Keep it up.
Also there's ONE typo I ran across talking about celestial horn gaver (gave) her (yada yada yada)
Fav and tracking
Ohhhh SHIT! Psycho Lyra is coming!!!!
RUUUUUUUUN!!!!!!!!!!
annnnnd that image is now burned into my brain, thank you for both the incredible level of laughter and the necessity of a therapist
Wow...just...wow
EDIT: (5 minutes after original post): I just noticed that writers changed. I wondered why it changed in writing style. not a bad thing, just remarking for others that notice the change in style, but not writer change.
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Stan just gave the story to me since he has a wedding to plan and pilots to train. I wrote Category 5 with him as well. Was sad to see that go.
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It's a minor change in style but noticeable if you read prev chapters to this one.
I tried to go read category 5 after the edit I made and I was disappointed that it "didn't exist"
It sounded really good too!!!!
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It was I'll see if I can get a moderator on it
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I got it up on my account!
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I will read it as soon as I finish the one I'm on or find a good stopping point... (82 chapters...and almost 10k words a chapter...)
a really cute chapter, with plenty of feels
if there was only more people who thought like this *cough* Fox News *cough*
time for a SUPER HAPPY ROMANCE PARTY!!!! YAY!!!
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>Fox News
made my day!
'cutesy relationship stuff' should be added to the 'Triggers' in the description, this chapter was so sweet I got diabetes
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Added that for you
I saw one problem...
"...Maybe looked down..."
May be (missing space)
Still very well done chapter, VERY few put the vids IN the chapter. Usually links or words turned green that connects to said link.
Idk if you DO, but that makes it seem like you care for the tablet (or smartphone....) users like me
keep up the good work!!!!!
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Thanks. My thoughts exactly on the videos. I hate links with a passion.
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We are few of a kind my friend...
So very.....very few...
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Love the forever reference hope it gets a second season
If it turns out that Twilight play with magic on them, oh she is going for a real scolding
Right. Only one day after her first sexual fling and she's already showing signs of pregnancy? Even with magic, I call shenanigans.
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My aunt is an ER nurse, so people get sick the day after a one-night-stand and find out their pregnant, even if it's just the flu, simple blood work proves that. But I never said anything about it being canon. She could just have the flu. You never know...
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Let's just wait, I'm sure there's a twist to it. Let's not call shenanigans QUIIIIIITE yet.
I read another fic that had a thing like this, but it had a reasonable explanation in the next chapter.
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But seriously, maybe it is a magically induced pregnancy? It could be Twilight wanted to see what a Pony/Human hybrid would look like and forgot about a little thing called ethics.
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5536139 +1, just because of Super Troopers
Can't wait for the next chapter! Very good story so far! Keep up the good work!
I hope Bon Bon gave Lyra a HUGE apology.
Question: Why did Luna yell at the guard for calling Taylor 'the human', if this was their first time meeting him? How would the guard even know the human's name?
5557591 Taylor has been around for 4 monhs, and it sounds like Luna has told that guard many times that he has a name. He's probably been talked about a lot.
Judging by the first section, I'm going to assume Bon Bon never apologized to Lyra for throwing her out because of her
obsessionconstant talk about human being real?After I read the first chapter where I read the Bon Bon kicked Lyra out due to her talk of human, I felt bad for Lyra. Now, Lyra is a psychotic kidnapper and rapist? To quote Sweetie Belle, "OH COME ON!"
5518228 what story is this that has 82 chapters with 10k words per chapter? I must read it.
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I'll try to find it real quick, might take a while if it didn't get faved like I tried to before the tab closed itself...
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Will take longer than expected...not faved, tracked, or anything, and I need to refind the group I found it in too.
I'll let you know once I've found it
BUT...
I do have a 60 chapter story with 2K a chapter at least. 161,484 words total and still incomplete.
Story: the lost human
By: Awesomesauce4
Pretty good too. Better than most I've read.
Human x royalty is involved.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/215451/the-lost-human
Noooooo! I was easing on February 11 2015 and ran out of parts to read >_<
Please......never let this end! It's SOOOOOOOO good! I love this fanfic! Keep up the good work please!
Oh and umm....any one know when next part is coming out...?
(P.s- I shall follow this story and any other stories you post from hence forth!)
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I have a terrible case of writer's block for the time being. However, feel free to check out my other stories in the meantime
5617579 with pleasure ^.^
aww... it's over already, when the sequel?
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>implying there will be a sequel