I like. This has good grammar, a interesting storyline, and a romance. This could go far.

5491853
Thank you!

this is the first time I've read a 'Human in Equestria' fic where Bon Bon wants the human

it's also the first fic with Lyra and Bon Bon I've read where they are not the closest of friends/lovers

I await the next chapter

Great story! Love it so far! Moar plz!

5495970
Thanks other Stan!

5491992

Forgot the name, but there was one with bonbon falling in love with a human who rainbow Dash sorta got to first. She also was living with lyra, but lyra moved out. The whole thing was kind of a downhill story.

So far I'm seeing a short version of the first chapter of xenophilia. I'll keep it on my list to see where it goes.

Love the forever reference hope it gets a second season

She knew what a human was, after all, she had lived for Lyra for years before the tolerant earth-pony had to give her the boot for her eccentricity.

I hope Bon Bon gave Lyra a HUGE apology.

5495993 would you be thinking of Sweets and a dash of rainbow by Sir hat?