{{Story is cancelled and up for adoption!}}
Immediately following her defeat in the first movie, Sunset Shimmer realizes that not only does everyone hate her, but she is a danger to those around her. So she decides to do what's best for both worlds, and end her life.
The thing is, not everyone hates her. But can her real friends get to her in time, and show her the error of her ways?
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Those feels...
Just beautiful...https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=WkxXDIuOC38
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Indeed.
Alright nice!!!
SunShy! Sunshy!
I'm watching this, I'm interested
5406051 I do adore SunShy...
5406069 No! I will not lose yet another fic to that ship! Sunlight is the OTP!
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AppleSet? Silly Shaud, Sunset X her human counterpart is OTP.
I will let it slide this one time though because every ship should have at least one story devoted to it and I can indeed not remember seeing this one anywhere before.
THIS IS SO ORIGINAL!!!!!
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5418816 I have converted you! YUS! My plan for world domination is taking shape! Mwahaha!
In all seriousness though, while I do like Sunset/Shimmer, that was really only done for that one fic. In others I like them as, like, separated twins. Ever seen Twitches? That's kinda how I imagine them xD
But don't get me wrong, I still love the ship! Lol, and yes, every ship should have at least one story dedicated to it. I've seen some odder ones here on Fim to prove it xD
5420590 Wait a minute... *checks author* Oh so that story was from you too! I honestly didn't notice. With all the Sunset Shimmer stories I'm reading these days it's all starting to blur together and your lack of an avatar isn't helping matters.
5420702 Lol, I know how you feel.
Yeah, I need an avatar... I want to upload an image of my own to do it, but that would require me learning how to use our scanner xD
5420710 You can aways just use a picture of best pony like I do. It's not as if you could resist those eyes:
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5420728 I used a picture of best human ;3
5420824 Both are fine by me really.
I don't know if I really like AJ a lot, but so far this story is great and changing my mind. I can't believe that I am saying this but I'm rooting for AJ and Sunset. Great story.
Ohhhhh i like that, that is interessting. Somehow this is really exciting, well i look how it will turn out.
Well i don´t know, i know there is a romance involved, but somehow it seems a bit excessive, that "m-m-my hero", even if she is weak right now, it doesn´t fit her personality.
It is a really interessting story, i don´t know what could probably went wrong, but i hope you keep up the good work i really like it.
5434454 You deserve a cookie ;D That line in particular will become important veeeryyy sooooon...... I can't say anymore, or it will give away too much...
5434498 yaaaaay, a cookie makes me always happy
.......no really, i know some yummy cookies, i just need to remember the names of some new ones i had the first time this winter
It is always nice to know if i accidently discover something important, should that actually be a hint?, now i am interessted if i just could guess more behind that simple sentence.
No it is alright, i want it to be a suprise, what happens next and all.
I probably said it already, but good job.
I like the expression on the face of your Sunset Avatar, it looks funny that way.
5434839 Cookies are nice, yup yup yup!
Well, I'll tell you (and anyone else reading this comment) that Sunset saying that to Applejack isn't meaningless ;3 I'm not usually good at foreshadowing or ironic echoes, but this one... hehehe...
5434858 i haven´t read much from you yet, but it looks interessting and i plan to read them, what i mean is i think i follow you for now.
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Come on, there are too many SunLight fics out there.
Some SunShy every now and then is a good thing.
Well, it's certainly a strange pair. But hey, at long it's well written, I'll gladly read it.
5500449 On the contrary, SunShy has got to be one of the top 3 most widespread Sunset pairings. I wouldn't mind if it was only now and then as you claim it is, but this is a real epidemic.
tired?
also... yeah, it does feel a bit rushed. you're just showing what's happening, and sometimes that's fine, but in a case like this one, is the build up what really sells it.
my mind says it should be "with the realization"... but I have been wrong before.
we'll get you some...? we're going to get you some...?
also, laughed at the well, shit moment. hope you elaborate more about how she's gone longer than three days without eating. not having money for it, or magical biology from equestria makes eating less important and she didn't got the memo it wasn't like that on this world?
edit: you just made the tracking list.
Does this fic have Cheerimac?
5516599 Indeed it does!
When can we expect the next chapter for this?
5534255 I have it about halfway done, I'm just at a bit of a crossroads on what direction to take it (I have two ideas, both totaly opposites yet would go about the same way... You'll understand when I post it >.<)
Short answer: Before next Wednsday.
If all goes well, it could go up this Friday. If all doesn't go well... Like I said, Wednsday should be the latest. On the one hand I want this to be my own decision, but on the other I kinda want feedback on the idea... I'm stuck >.<
Judjing from some pf the comments there shall be feelz
*judging pardon the typo
Flimmershy
If you know me ill just go ahead and give you a mustache
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wear with pride*
I'm always up for new Sunset Shimmer pairings! Also I like sad things so this has both of those! You had me at Slow buildup to AppleSet. Fav'd,upvoted can't wait for the next chapter!
I am just wondering when the next chapter is going to be out
You're confusing characters in this fic, in particular the humans with their pony counterparts. One example:
1. I can see pony Applejack Calling Cheerilee by her name only because both are adult enough mares who are working for their livelihood. Human Applejack, however, is a student at CHS where Cheerilee teaches. Even withouth the coincidence that is having Cheerilee at the Apples home Applejack would have refered to her like a student refers to her teacher.
2. The Element of Honesty is pony Applejack, not human Applejack.
5884552 Cheerilee is a family friend in this fic, so Applejack very well could call her that.
And the elements have human counterparts, as seen in the movies, and Applejack is the counterpart to the Element of Honesty. As seen in the movies.
Major thumbs down for this shit piece.
5418816 OTP? Whats that mean?
6115629 One True Pair(ing)
6119528 thanks!
Eight months since the last update? Well, I am an eternal optimist, so I shall hold out hope for more updates.
5884552 no human Applejack is the Element of Honesty too, how do you think they stopped Sunset in the first place, there's a scene in EG where they're all transforming and it calls out all their elements.
As for Cheerilee I kinda agree but I don't know why she would be at Applejacks in the first place maybe she's living with them or something.