• Member Since 10th Dec, 2012
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Aiyonbeam


Somehow, I manage to write sad fluff. I'd be concerned about my mental health, but I'm too busy writing.

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This story is a sequel to New Leaf


It's been there for as long as I can remember. Staring me in the face, a part of everything I was, everything I am. Only recently have I begun staring back at it, trying to find out what it truly is.
But it's true what they say; when you stare into the Abyss, the Abyss stares into you.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 18 )

Mah God....

I need more of this ship!!

Ok, how many times have Sunset tried to kill herself. I'm getting a feeling it was more then 3 times and that worrying.:fluttershysad:

Oh man I had tears in my eyes!
This was a great story, I like to see another one focused on Trixie and the aftermath of what she had done to Sunset, how she deals with it and the conquences.

6283372 2.5 times, actually. This time was the roof of her condo, and then New Leaf had her try to drown herself, and then she got stabbed, which kind of counts.
I guess.

Even though I read New leaf.. I was primarily Lost in this sequel.

Interesting start, interesting look at someone's mind who is going through that. But I got a little lost towards the end when Rainbow said she loved Sunset. Felt kind of out of nowhere. Not much build up in this or the previous story, but it could be plausible if it had been built up early on or more signs/hints for the more observant readers to notice....... Unless there were in the first one and I'm not one of those observant readers? :rainbowhuh:

Damn you! :flutterrage: You got me all Misty Eyed, Im a guy, Guys don't cry:raritycry::pinkiesad2::fluttercry::fluttershysad:

What happened what withi Trixie?

Gotta have moar!

Huh, that's an... interesting direction. I liked it.

Dammit! I don't like crying! Fuck yeh author!!!:flutterrage:

6544032 Your tears are delicious. c:

6337471 Agreed, there needs to be more build up between Rainbow and Sunset for the romance tag to make more sense.

No thumbs down but no thumbs up either

I loved this one too! And I never thought of a ship between Sunset and Rainbow. It would be really it would be really cute actually and maybe having a girl/boyfriend would encourage her to be less self centered and...well, egotistic.

The way you've done this story is what I enjoyed the most (I mean 1st person, with the Voice talking).
About the story itself, it was good too, even if I misunderstood some things at the beginning and at the first reading.

But that didn't prevented me to add it into my favourites ^^.

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