Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.
It's Hearts and Hooves Day, Fluttershy's least favorite holiday. All her animal friends seem to like it, and all her pony friends do, too.
Originally written for Author Support prompt 7; 2 December 2012, and I just got around to posting it now.
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I..I'm not really sure what the point of the incest thing was...but this was still really cute and fun. Despite wanting to slap Big Mac for being a moron.
This is the one area in which Mac's usual persistence doesn't hold sway. More's the pity. (Especially since, were I in his collar, I'd probably have done the same thing.)
This is a great little story, in fact it's two little stories, only one of which gets explored. Everybody hitting on Fluttershy on Hearts and Hooves day is hilarious, as we are shown.
What we aren't shown much of is Fluttershy spending Hearts and Hooves day as the matchmaker of the animal world. That part is dropped almost immediately, and it's a shame, it's a great concept I would love to see expanded on.
If Twilight is speaking and her five friends gasped, then Fluttershy was there the whole time. Obviously since she walked out of the house that wasn't the case. If you edit look at that in the future.
No, don't go Big Mac,
give the filly a lip smack.
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Haha math is hardGood catch.
Had to laugh at Big mac ending though I'm not for or against the pair .. But he is right.. It sounded to me more like the girls wanted FS for themselves but couldn't bring themselves to admit it.. But all in all it was worth a laugh.. Would've liked to have seen the animal matchmaking part better developed...
5165112 I agree with you...
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Damn looking back at that post, it sounds like I am being a ass. Sorry if it came across that way, I was probably trying to be funny or something.
“Not. Int’rested.”
Best response XD.
“And check this out: it’s reusable!”
AHAHA XD
D'aww Big Mac :).
Short and sweet. I liked it!
Hahaha, great
I liked how you wrote the mane six, and especially Fluttershy's POV in the beginning; it all felt well in character. On top of that, the end was nice and punchy, so what's not to love (not Fluttershy, apparently
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Why you gotta be so darn cute, fluttershy?