Just another atheist bisexual brony/furry clopper with a shitty family, suicidal tendencies, and a need to masturbate to... things... at least 2 times a day.
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Damn son that was amazing.
Giving this a like and favourite.
Think you could do another chapter where Chrysalis does the giving?
Great story.
Do another chapter, please?
looks down and sees a straining tent on the pants
so awesome
also just Hatty said a chapter where Chryssi does the giving would be great
Dayum!
Moar.
finally! a male on futa story that didn't involve the guy getting pegged or giving bj. These are fucking rare.
I recommend checking for errors the next time before publishing, but otherwise quite the good job for a first story.
And totally my fetish.
danmit , double danmit , first danmit for the thing being far to short otherwise i would have been interested in it , then double for reading the comments finding it does something that's not really done ever in these fics making it interesting.....
5111244 what's wrong with pegging!?
J-cup? M-cup?
These words mean nothing to me.
5111354 It's just a huge turnoff for me. I mean, I have a bunch of weird kinks and I like anal, but pegging is
Sure, you could argue "But if it's alright with women getting it up the butt, why not guys? [insert sexist comment here]" The way I see it, it's not natural. By that, I mean if nature intended for guys to get penetrated, humans would reproduce asexually or we would be changing genders like some sea creatures.
I love futa, and desire more male on futa, but really don't like it when the guy recieves. (Of course, this does imply that gay is a turnoff for me too. Which it is.)
5111847 Glad I ain't the only one!
18 feet of changeling dick?
This story seems very rushed and jumpy, try slowing down a little bit. Describe to us a little more.
5111847 if homosexuality is unnatural, then why is it found in nature?
All things aside, it's perfectly fine to not like pegging and to say it makes you uncomfortable, but it isn't okay to attack other ways of life. I don't think you were doing so, and I hope you have a nice day.
5112050 I wasn't intending to attack others. I was kinda rambling by the end, and it probably came out wrong. Still, now that you mention it, i do recall dolphins having gay relations.
I'm just looking at it from a reproductive point of view.
That is not how I would imagine chrysalis to be, and enlarged genitalia is a turn off for me. These are just personal preferences though, and not nearly enough for me to dislike the fic. Typos galore, combined with a very jumpy sort of flow, did cause me to dislike the fic though. It messes with the way I perceive the fic and makes it harder to imagine the scene properly, personal bias or not. 29 other people who like the fic obviously disagree with me, but I refuse to dislike a fic without telling the reason why.
5112041 I think he meant 18 inch. Also, now he must return the favor.
lol
Blatant wish fulfillment
*Like*
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Never said I didn't have similar wishes XD
Hot and amusing Story! Please please more!
Meh.
It was a hot idea, but it's a bit too rushed and has too little description to actually get much of a rise out of me. A good first try though, honestly it's probably better than my first clopfic.
5111451 More than just a double handful. For example, Ivy from Soul-Calliber is about G Cup.
5111451
Not exactly a perfect way to explain things.
Really hot. Awesome job.
and then they had a baby name Crystal maker
That is a true love between Pony Stallion and Changeling Queen Shemale~ 💓❤️️
I have the same big and strong feelings as Rainmaker was told to her to Queen Chrysalis and I will do the same to get to the Wastelands to find her Hive.
Well, this is disappointing. The build up, pointless as any build up in porn, lacked imagination. The actual porn scene was far too short. The whole thing is littered with grammatical errors and tense changes, also.
I think, though, this might be worth a rewrite as the concept of a pony willingly becoming a changeling buffet would be much more entertaining if the story were darker and the risk for the pony was higher.