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TheGentlemanCreeper


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Meet Daymos. He's just like any other pony in Ponyville.

He works.

He plays.

He has bodies in his basement.

Okay, maybe he's not like any other pony.

But he's only trying to help.

He's a killer with a conscience and murderer with morals.

So if you end up on his table... You probably deserve what's coming.

Author's Note: Okay, this is going to take a while... I have a HUGE story planned for this thing and it's going to take a while to write it all. But I feel like if I write like 3000+ words a week, I can make some headway on it. Now, about the story. It's not exactly a crossover; it's more of an 'inspired by'. One day, I started wondering how a Dexter-esque pony would play out and this spawned. I wanted to submit it to Equestria Daily... But I kept feeling like their requirements were so arbitrary and restricting. I almost dropped it because of all the tiny little nitpicks. So, here you are. Unabridged, unabashed, unedited. Enjoy.

Chapters (12)
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Comments ( 318 )

Haven't read it, I will. Seems interesting.

I normally despise Grimdark, but in this context... Well, this story is rather interesting. I'll keep watch of it a while, see where it goes. :duck:

Interesting. Hope to see good ending for Scoots.

I love this, it's awesome. I admit, I have never seen Dexter but if that show is like this, then it seems really good.

I just have one question: Will Daymos at any point taste Pinkie's cupcakes? Just want to know where you're taking Pinkie in this.

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No, that psychotic Pinkie will not be making an appearance in this fic... But there's definitely more to her than meets the eye. You'll just have to wait and see.

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whew,so no cupcakes , yay for that

and the dark tag is here just because anything with death is dark for ponies i take it, its not bad at all.


Will eagerly wait for more.

Fascinating!

I like that you aren't going with the usual, 'skin-deep' Pinkie Pie here. :pinkiesmile:

I wonder, will Scootaloo earn her 'cleaning' Cutie Mark? :scootangel:

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I mightt as well get this out in the open: In my story, Pinkie has two personalities. Her normal, bubbly happy self... And something darker. Only one of them is aware of the other. Take a guess who.

And this... Scootaloo has a special little place in my heart and it wouldn't feel right to corrupt her like that. I do have something planned involving her, Daymos, and some extracurricular activities. As said, you'll have to wait and see.

If this thing gets enough positive reviews then I'll try to get the next chapter of Purple Haze AND this posted by next week.

I must admit that I wasn't expecting this to be beyond a 4/4.5:ajsmug:,
but I think that it deserves a 5 mostly because it is well wriiten:raritywink:
and the pace isn't negativly affected by the words(sometimes happens:pinkiesick:)

keep up the good work!:pinkiehappy:

Is it wrong that I kinda like this one? I normally hate stories like this, but this author wrote it and I'm a fan of his other stuff, so I gave it a shot an was expecting a balls out torture fest, but instead I got a well written, subtle, suspenseful piece of fan fiction. I loved everything about this: Daymos' internal monologue, his actions and motivations and how established characters stay in character in relation to what going on around them.

I even have the casting picked out in my head. The Director is David Fincher(you know, Fight Club, Zodiac and Se7en). The Cast are: Daymos is Clive Owen, Pinkie is Scarlett Johansson(wait, I know what you're thinking, but I mean bubbly Lost in Translation Johansson) and the list goes on from there. Music by Hans Zimmer with a couple of original songs by Seal.

Very well-written. I picture Daymos having a sort of Hannibal-esque voice. Also, to Thewaffler: I like your casting choices so far. Keep that idea up with each passing chapter, as I'm interested to see the full cast list.

Nicely done Creeper. Well-written, interesting story and concept, and twists. This is shaping up to be a very good read in the future.

Ah a split personality pinkie
(I have read those, the bad 'cupcake' personality usually takes over completely when pinkies tries to stop her by commiting suicide. still good work thus far.)

liking it so far...let's see what happens! :trixieshiftright:

*clears throat to prepare for amazing speech*

Okay! I love this story, it's really funny, and dramatic, and other good stuff...

But it reminds me way too much of JtHM.

Was this on purpose? XD

Lol, just asking~ Anyway, keep writing! :pinkiehappy:

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Clive Owen as Daymos, I really, really like this idea.

aw....no cupcakes? shame liked that fic and how rainbow died...she deserved it

So you posted it after all...Let's see where this story goes...

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YOU SHUT YOUR MOUTH! YOU SHUT IT RIGHT NOW!

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Why don't you go back to your home on whore island. :flutterrage:

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Obvious troll is obvious. Guys, please don't feed the trolls.

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Sorry. I just always wanted to say that.

Nice story man, I'm deffinately favoreting this. Also, am I the only one who thought that Daymos reminded me of Mikami from Death Note?

Wish I could write a piece from the detective's point of view.

I'm watching this with interest :]

Hm, I am intruiged. Your more lighthearted shipping stories kind of sucked me in, and the "Dexter"-vibe here really gets me. Looking forward to more!

Very good!

Oh god, you're not brining the pony equivalent of the Trinity Killer into this are you? :rainbowderp:

Good start so far. I was a fan of (the first two) Dexter books, and you definitely have the right feel for it.

I like where this is going. :pinkiehappy:

FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! MOAR!

I was also going to point out that this is how [url=http://askscootaloothesadist.tumblr.com/[]Scootaloo The Sadist was born. But you stated in your comments that it is not goig to happen.

Wow loving this story

Intriging....

No.....update......please......update.........soon........been...waiting..in....front......of......computer.....for.....6 days........(slumps to floor unconscious)

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Once my finals are done, I'll be working on this, and all of my stories everyday. My finals end next tuesday, 8:15 PM EST. Mark your calenders,

(revives) yaaaaaay:yay:

OH MY GOD, IT'S DEXTER I mean his Pony counterpart :rainbowlaugh:

Loving this story and would love to see more updates, you've made a great scenario and I look forward to future additions, adding this to the stories I'm tracking :pinkiehappy:.

My two favorite shows. put together in a fanfiction by an author who has the skills to do it well.


i am crying manly tears.:pinkiesad2:

So. Damn. Good.

I need moar!:yay:

I still absolutely love this :D

Can't wait for chapter four.

On another note, Daymos may well be the coolest stallion that ever lived. Just sayin'.

(I read it early, suck it everyone else c: :rainbowwild: )

Stay clean, my friends. :moustache:

Gory murder and Daaw in one chapter. :pinkiegasp:

Don't know whether to be horrified over the murders or smile because of Scootaloo.:pinkiecrazy:

Not bad,:moustache: but My little evil tales is better :raritywink:

I'm so happy Chapter 3 has been done :pinkiehappy:

I'm now eagerly waiting for chapter 4 :rainbowwild:

Very good Chapter, I enjoyed this backstory chapter, get it out of the way nice and early so we can all focus on the developing plot :raritystarry:

I hope I'm not the only one that sees the almost direct reference to Dexter's murder of the priest at the start of the book Darkly Dreaming Dexter. Its a awesome story and the way you tell it is awesome too, keep up the good work!

I hope I'm not the only one that sees the almost direct reference to Dexter's murder of the priest at the start of the book Darkly Dreaming Dexter. Its a awesome story and the way you tell it is awesome too, keep up the good work!

I hope I'm not the only one that sees the almost direct reference to Dexter's murder of the priest at the start of the book Darkly Dreaming Dexter. Its a awesome story and the way you tell it is awesome too, keep up the good work!

Pssst. Daymos you might want invest in some highly corrosive acid or a furnace to dispose of the bodies, buddy. Remember no witnesses, no body, equals no problems.
I love this series and it's great to see your work again Gentleman Creeper. Seriously, I've run out of nice things to say about the things you write so from now on I'm gonna recommend movies to watch:

Swordfish- It's a really good movie staring Hugh Jackman, Halle Berry, John Travolta and Don Cheadle. It's about a poor ex-hacker with a heart of gold who lives in squalor recruited by a terrorist organization lead by Travolta and Halle Berry plays his assistant while Cheadle is the righteous FIB/CIA dude is on his tail. The movie has everything: fake hacking gibberish, explosions, great car chases especially towards the end, over the top acting from Travolta and Halle Berry's nips. GO WATCH SWORDFISH AFTER READING THIS RIGHT NOW! YOU WON'T BE DISAPPOINTED. (Trailer Here)

Peace Out.

I have been anxiously awaiting an update for this story, and you have not disappointed. Hopefully the rest of the story is as catching as it has been so far. Keep 'em coming!

Is...is this what awesome feels like? Oh god i need more.

DAYMOS Y U NO EXIST IN MY COUNTRY!? :twilightangry2:

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