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While pursing Michael Morningstar, Ben 10 and his partner Rook are sucked into the land of Equestria. With Ben and his partner finding refuge with the mane six and the princesses, an old enemy of Equestria require Morningstar's help to take over the land. Can both Ben, his partner and the mane six stop the combined power of King Sombra and Michael Morningstar?
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Not bad. I see your fic has been inspired using some dialogue form my Justice League fic.
A nice meet and greet with Ben, Rook, and the Girls
Hope Ben and Rook will be prepared to face their old enemies, especially the girls.
Now the girls have alien powers. This is something to keep a watch on.
5959515 Yeah I'm guilty
5959515 I needed somewhere to start from
5960745 next chapter please
5989416 it's on its way my friend
6008875
Rook does not use contractions in the show.
5959523 what do mean?
Great story. "You do know how to type sentances, right?" I said, my OCD kicking in. "Plus, you seem to end all dialogue with a comma. Sometimes it's needed, but it's sort of abused." I then thought about the commas that appeared out of quotation. "By the way, 'wired' like everypony is having a sugar rush or 'weird' like 'odd' or 'you don't normally see that'? I think it would be a weird situation for Ben to meet magical ponies."
I hate to be a critic after being a grammar nazi, buuut...
1. Shining Armor lives in the Crystal Empire. Why is he Captain of the Canterlot guards?
2. Rook has family in danger? When?
This was neat. And I liked the including of some MLP alien fanart
6069601 thanks your support has been noted
Excellent job.
6088506 thanks it means a lot me and don't worry a sequel is on the way
I smell a sequel
This was good needs more art and a sequel
If you make one can you let me know, I don't think I'll see it in the front page
6541924 thanks I would be glad of the help
6548536 would help but can't draw to save anything
6548891 It's OK I can't draw anything to save the universe
6541924 I am writing a sequel, it is still in the works
6562274 great let me know when it's posted please
6562949 will do
my only promble with this story i think u should given ben a Ultimatrix
"You're going back behind bars" Rook said.
I think you mean behind glass
IS THERE GOING TO BE A SEQUEL!!!
"Sounds like a wired place." Rainbow admitted
indeed, my multi-colored friend, though the electrical bills are rather taxing on this 'wired' community
so Applebloom is thanking Ben but from their POV, Stinkfly is the one that saved them, why is Applebloom thanking Ben? and why keep the omnitrix a secret from them? surely after 1-2 seasons ben has kicked the habit of needing to keep the omnitrix a secret.
6867609 I may have made a mistake in writing this line, but it is good that the CMC thank Ben, thank you for your comment good sir
I really want to see ben and rd race
6940342 I will try and include that
5959523
Wow never thought I would see this. I read Ben 10 and mlp fiction now I see them combined plus my fave series' are being used Omniverse and friendship is magic.
9593016
I'm glad you like the story
Why WHY! THE HORROR THE HORROR! IT'S TIME TA STOP!
The horror
Didn't Ben talk about the Ultramatrix and the fact he can evolve his aliens to their ultimate forms a chapter or two ago? I'm pretty sure he did. Sounds more like Rainbow forgot about it.
9911361
Technically, Ben told them about the Omnitrix, since in Onmiverse he has the new Omnitrix, not the Ultimatrix
cool. i like how u inserted videos!
9874964
you dummy, thats four arms
10660359
It was joke. Years ago.
Did…did you actually reference Dusk’s Dawn?
11108260
I don't think so
I'm afraid I don't understand