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Time Agent pony


Time agent is the name, time travel and writing Fimfictions is the game

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This story is a sequel to My little Omniverse


It has been a few weeks since Ben 10 and Rook's adventure in Equestria, but now Ben and his partner must return to Equestria to defeat the undead ghostly villain from his world Zs'Skayr (pronounced "Zuh Scare") from turning Equestria into a land of darkness and ruled by his kind.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 48 )

Awesome chapter my friend and a sequel to can't wait for the next upload for this story I'll be waiting my friend and keep me posted on the story thanks

I hope he uses Toepick against Zs'Skayr.

Bringing back the ultimately nice

7957646 Thanks:raritywink:, what do you mean by ultimately nice?:twilightsheepish:

7957882 I meant to say Ultimatrix auto correct must have changed it at the last second

7957928 well it wouldn't be fair if Albedo was the only one who could go ultimate:raritywink:

7958594 True speaking of Albedo it's stupid as fuck that they changed his name in omniverse

7958746 they didn't change his name they only changed him into a kid version of Ben:twilightsheepish:

7960579 no they changed how it's pronounced which is close enough but still really fucking stupid to do

7960625 how is his name pronounced in Omniverse? :twilightsheepish:

7975574 like I said the way it's pronounced is different just go back and watch an episode from alien force and omniverse with him in it he first shows up in alien force ep the tale of 2 Bens

7976380 I've watch the Tale of two Bens, I think that I know what you mean:twilightsmile:

nicely done; also:

"And lastly the Elements from the Cloneverse" Paradox finished.
"Cloneverse?" Starlight asked, "you mean their clones of....us?"
"Not quite" replied, Fire Dash, "some of us are clones of two ponies, for example I'm a clone of Rainbow Dash and Firefly.

okay, now I'm curious about the others...mostly because I'm not overly familiar with this continuity...

I got an email about an an update titled along the lines of an evil team assembling, I'm guessing you uploaded too soon by mistake?

nicely done, though minor nitpick:

Ben 23 into Eyeguy,

pretty sure that Ben 23 would have a DIFFERENT name for that alien compared to his counterparts...

8069906 He does have different names for his aliens but Eyeguy still has the same name as the mainstream Ben's Eyeguy
also here's a video of Ben 23 calling him Eyeguy

Skip to 0:26 in the video to get your answer :twilightsheepish:

This is an awesome story my friend I'll be waiting for the next upload for this story alot and keep me posted

8128305 thanks and try not to take too long with the update my friend Ben 10 forever

8128309 OK can't wait until the next upload

8128309 oh and​try to check out The return of a legend by axel106106 and read that story I think u might like it if not then it's fine by me just wanted u check it out read it:pinkiehappy::scootangel: and let me know what u think about it ok:raritywink:

nicely done; also:

"With what we're going to need more then just one person on the inside," Starlight Sparkle stated.

I'm guessing "Starlight Sparkle" is from the Clone/Fusion-verse as a combination of Starlight Glimmer and Twilight Sparkle: nice, though am I the only one worried that the only ones from that universe that have actually been NAMED (at least from *my* point of view) seem to be her and Fire Dash?

nice way to end the adventure; side note: in a race of the fastest fliers and/or aliens across worlds, the audience is the TRUE winner; also:

"Well thats the end of the story," Pinkie sighed.
"Yeah," Twilight said, "Seeing the other version of Ben and the Elements of Harmony made me wonder our story might have turned out."
"Indeed, my little ponies," Celestia smiled, "There are so many different ways to tell a story, but that's what makes them so interesting; you could never predict how they are going to turn out."

:ajsmug: you just couldn't resist, could you?

not bad; also, a bit late for this, but let me take a stab at the other members of the "Clone 6", based on the picture from left to right, as they really weren't named at this point:
Starlight Sparkle: explained in the last chapter, so no guesswork here
"'Nightmare' Rarity" (probably not her real name, but what I'm calling her to differentiate her from the fashion pony we all know and love): a clone of Rarity with a bit Luna/Nightmare Moon thrown in there
"Applejane" (probably not her real name, but what I'm calling her to differentiate her from the silly pony we all know and love): Applejack clone with bit of Megan's personality/style mixed in
"Pinkie-corn" (probably not the real name, but what I'm calling her to differentiate her from the party pony we all know and love): Pinkie Pie "born" as a unicorn...I'm suddenly terrified
Fire Dash: explained in chapter 3, so no guesswork here
"Flutterling" (probably not the real name, but what I'm calling her to differentiate her from the timid pony we all know and love): Flutteshy "born" as a Changling (the reformed variation, not the original one)

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you are right, just to clarify:raritywink::
Charity (Made with the DNA of Rarity and Luna)
Apple Pie (A clone of Applejack)
Rose Quartz (A clone of Pinkie Pie)
Flutter (Made with a mix of Fluttershy and Changeling's DNA)

also with the name here's a link to the deviantart page the picture is on

I don't have words to say how awsome this was.

Suddenly there was a scream from below them, they looked down to see Princess Celestia fighting off a more monster creature the ones they had faced. the beast's upper half slightly resembled a frog's and three black claws on each hand. With black crystal shaped spikes on it's shoulders, and had four bacteriophage-like legs.

"Stay back, creature!" Celestia cried, she fired a blast from her horn at the creature, which only served to make it even more angry.

word of advice: you might want to replace the picture that was supposed to go between the above quotes...

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"That would explains why we saw Eon in all the other dimensions," Ben 23 replied.

dude, what happened to his "gyro mogul ignorant" personality?

UA Ben into Fasttrack,

fasttrack isn't nearly as fast as xlr8

"I got you the kiddy meals," Ben replied, "just don't let them know your over eight."

I hope Ben made sure to give them veggie burgers.

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