Omniverse Update · 12:57pm Sep 23rd, 2019
Hope you all enjoyed the first chapter. Please review because it would be extremely helpful. The next chapter will combine both parts for The More Things Change episode. I was also hoping to put some more lore into it. I am also glad that people liked the first chapter since it was an experiment. If there is anymore news regarding the story, I will be sure to post it.
Please skip this if you already know about pacing.
One way to think about pacing is that it's a rhythm.
You need slow to balance out the fast.
After the fast action bits, you need slow parts so the reader can catch their breaths and for the characters in the story to reflect on what happens. This is where you can show what type of person the character is by how they handled the previous action. Also by having characters reflect on what happens, you make the action more important. This could also be the time to put hints in for the next fast bit depending on the story.
What do you think?
3235102
Yeah definitely.
3235101
Yourwelcome.
3235099
Oh okay thank you for the support.
3235098
Not exactly my thing but I’ll be rooting for you.