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  • 227 weeks
    Up for Adoption

    Hello, I was wondering if there would be anyone out there that would like to adopt my Into the Omniverse and Maybe Back fanfic? I am just not interested in continuing it and I would hate to abandon it so if there is anyone out there who is interested in taking over for the story please let me know.

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  • 231 weeks
    Slow Update

    I know that it has been a while since I have updated Into the Omniverse and Maybe Back but it is still a working progress. I still have plans for writing my own episodes and maybe even some episodes from My Little Pony. I am also trying to plan out more lore for this universe and I am hoping that there would be more Gen 5 leaks out soon. I defiantly have plans for Ben being able to use Equis magic. I just don’t know which kind would suit him and there will also be other types of magic besides

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  • 234 weeks
    Omniverse Update

    Hope you all enjoyed the first chapter. Please review because it would be extremely helpful. The next chapter will combine both parts for The More Things Change episode. I was also hoping to put some more lore into it. I am also glad that people liked the first chapter since it was an experiment. If there is anymore news regarding the story, I will be sure to post it.

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  • 234 weeks
    More News for Omniverse FIM

    Okay, so I am thinking about maybe giving Twilight a bit of a backstory for Twilight. I don’t know why but I alway like to try to make some of the readers feel bad for the characters. Of course, the story centers around Twilight trying to redeem herself and I am not sure how I can bring in the humane six without making it sound too random. I also might need help with this alternate universe’s lore. I have a basic idea but I don’t know how to incorporate it into the story. I am also trying to

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  • 234 weeks
    Upcoming Series

    Hey, I just wanted to let you all know that I will be making a My Little Pony: Friendship is magic and Ben 10: Omniverse crossover. What can I say, they are both really great shows. However, the story is going to follow the Omniverse storyline with a few changes. The first thing that you need to know is that it will take place in an alternate universe. It will be in the same universe as Equestria Girls but with a few changes because it won’t be considered an alternate universe if there weren’t.

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Sep
23rd
2019

Omniverse Update · 12:57pm Sep 23rd, 2019

Hope you all enjoyed the first chapter. Please review because it would be extremely helpful. The next chapter will combine both parts for The More Things Change episode. I was also hoping to put some more lore into it. I am also glad that people liked the first chapter since it was an experiment. If there is anymore news regarding the story, I will be sure to post it.

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Sep
21st
2019

Upcoming Series · 8:42pm Sep 21st, 2019

Hey, I just wanted to let you all know that I will be making a My Little Pony: Friendship is magic and Ben 10: Omniverse crossover. What can I say, they are both really great shows. However, the story is going to follow the Omniverse storyline with a few changes. The first thing that you need to know is that it will take place in an alternate universe. It will be in the same universe as Equestria Girls but with a few changes because it won’t be considered an alternate universe if there weren’t.

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Please skip this if you already know about pacing.

One way to think about pacing is that it's a rhythm.
You need slow to balance out the fast.
After the fast action bits, you need slow parts so the reader can catch their breaths and for the characters in the story to reflect on what happens. This is where you can show what type of person the character is by how they handled the previous action. Also by having characters reflect on what happens, you make the action more important. This could also be the time to put hints in for the next fast bit depending on the story.

What do you think?

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Oh okay thank you for the support.

3235098
Not exactly my thing but I’ll be rooting for you.

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