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Twilight sparkle a.k.a. Mare Do Well is trying to keep the crime in Manehatten down ever since Rainbow Dash a.k.a. The Dash disappeared. To make things worse Soarin a.k.a. the original Dash and Scootaloo a.k.a. Kid Dash are feeling guilty about Rainbow's disappearance. Something strange linking with Rainbow Dash's disappearance begins to happen to the heroes
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Hello there. I have to say, so far, pretty good job on the exchanges, action, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places.
6060502 much appreciated
Hey there. Excellent job on this latest chapter. It took a while, but was definitely worth the wait. The exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places. If you do any other Mare-Do-Well: the Brave and the Bold stories after finishing this one, I have a few ideas for later casting:
Green Arrow: Trixie (semi-friendly rivalry with Twilight)
Plastic Man: either Pinkie Pie or Cheese Sandwich (your pick which one if you like the idea)
Superman: Either Celestia, Big Mac or Applejack (your pick which one if you like the idea)
Doctor Fate: Sunset Shimmer
Wildcat: Daring Do
Lex Luthor: The Flim Flam Brothers (sharing the role)
The Joker: The Mane-Iac
Bat-Mite/Mxyzptlk (a fusion of the two): Discord
Darkseid: Tirek
Gentleman Ghost: King Sombra
Then again, if you don't like the ideas, I will completely understand and profusely apologize for wasting your time.
6890636 I think that these ideas are awesome and will try and use them in my stories also how do you come up with these connections?
6908927 Thanks very much. As for how the ideas came to me, I honestly don't know. Sometimes they just pop in (though, unfortunately, not often enough for me to do this stuff myself).
6909156 I know the feeling and thank you for the awesome ideas if you get anymore please tell me I'm always open to new ideas
6909162 Thanks. Actually I DO have some more possible ideas:
Captain Marvel: Either Apple Bloom or Pipsqueak (your choice which one if you like the idea)
Wonder Woman: Either Applejack (if she isn't playing Superman), Little Strongheart or Princess Cadance (your choice which one if you like the idea)
The Martian Manhunter: Either Luna, Doctor Whooves or Zecora (your choice which one if you like the idea)
Fire and Ice: Lyra and Bon Bon
Aquaman: Bulk Biceps
Krypto the Superdog: Either Philomenia (if Celestia is playing Superman) or Winnoa (if either Big Mac or Applejack is playing Superman) (your pick which one if you like the idea)
Jimmy Olsen: Featherweight
Alfred: Spike
Ace the Bathound: Owlicious
Equinox: Starlight Glimmer
Again, I hope this helps at least a little.
Again, I hope this helps at least a little.
6909156 just a question, who do you think would be a good pick for Aquaman?
6911842 Good question. Part of me is saying Fluttershy (the telepathy with aquatic animals upgraded to telepathy with animals in general) and part of me is saying Bulk Biceps (much closer to Aquaman's boisterous personality). In the end, though, I'd probably go with Bulk.
6909269 let me know when you come up with more ideas
So... Mare do well can run fast like The Dash?
Because you have her running on the treadmill with them...
6912404 I am basing on a scene from Batman: The Brave and Bold where Batman is running on the Cosmic Treadmill at the same speed as the two Flashes.
You could think of it as if Mare-Do-Well used a speed spell to make herself faster
6912059 who would say would be a good fit for the heros called Spector and Captain Marvel (SHAZAM)?
when I need ideas on who in the MLP universe should be who in the DC universe I know who to call
7093809 I don't know about the Spectre, but as for Captain Marvel; I believe I already answered that one if you will go back and look over my possible future casting picks. Just the save you the hunt, though, I will repeat my answer: Either Apple Bloom or Pipsqueak, depending on your choice.
7093808 Oh, and thanks for the compliment. I WILL keep trying to think of other possible casting.
7094032 I look forward to your ideas, by the way any ideas for an evil version of Mare-Do-Well? I'm trying to put together a pony versions of The Crime Syndicate and the Justice Lords
7095112 The Mare-Do-Rotten is the best name I can think of for an evil counterpart to the Mare-Do-Well. The Mare-Do-Rotten's outfit is identical to the Mare-Do-Well's except for being in yellow, red and black.
7095413 thanks for the idea
7097123 You're quite welcome.
7095413 like this costume? orig06.deviantart.net/827a/f/2013/293/f/b/the_nefarious_negamare_by_gothamscarecrow-d6r4sd9.png
7097442 also who do you think should be the Marvel hero Dare-Devil?
7101193 Yeah. That's exactly what I mean. Thanks for finding the pic. :-D
7101196 That's a good question. Possibly an appropriate OC. A blind (though his remaining four senses have been heightened to super-equine sharpness), red maned and tailed, black coated Earth pony stallion with a golden law book for a cutie mark. The costume, of course, would be a ponified replica of the classic red Daredevil costume, save for a "G" replacing one of the Ds and having artificial wings on the back of the costume (useful for gliding, but NOT actual flight). The civilian name might be Raymond Griffith (a fusion of the names of the actors who played Perry Mason [Raymond Burr] and Ben Matlock [Andy Griffith], two of the most famous fictional lawyers), but the costumed name would be Guardian Devil.
7101388 I will think about your idea and make some changes of my own
7103271 Thanks. I appreciate you considering at least part of this. :-D
7103488 no problem
Hey there. Again, thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. The exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up were all done in all the right places. I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Oh, and I'm still trying to think of possible casting for your planned story based on "Legends of Tomorrow".
Oh an update? Must read!
7383227 thanks
Hey there. Thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, very good job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and climax set-up in all the right places. I'm definitely going to be looking forward to the next chapter as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
7572042 thank you my friend
Hey there. Thanks very much for getting the final chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Very good job on the exchanges, action, emotional content and wrap-up in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more stories in this series as soon as time and inspiration will allow. Just, a few details:
1. In all honesty, just please try to make the chapters longer by including more detail. I don't mean go overboard on the detail; I just mean be a little more descriptive about certain scenes, characters and actions.
2. Just because these are BASED ON certain episodes of certain shows doesn't mean you have to follow it nearly word-for-word, shot-for-shot. It is not just okay, but also encouraged for you to work in minor differences beyond just the characters.
Beyond that, keep up the good work.
7590532 thank you for the input and to answer you statement about following the story word-for-word I'm not very good at thinking up lines to add to the story, which is why I look to people like you to help me out with that problem and appreciate and consider all the idea you come out with
7590543 Thanks. Just contact me via the Personal Messages and I will do my best to help you. It might take a while (Owing to the fact I don't have much time for that sort of computer work), but I will still try to help over the weekends.
7590559 that sounds good I'm always at school so it's very hard when I get home to think of anything, sometimes,
This is the kind of story I'd want to read, but the fact that only the heroes have ponified names while the villains don't threw me for a loop and I can't continue beyond this chapter as a result.
8154897 sorry you feel that way, I hope you enjoy my other stories
Some clever and novel ideas here. I especially liked the twist of LD as the villain!
8652683
I'm glad of you like it