Accidentally deleted the new chapter instead of a partial one I never intend to finish.

Reposted it.

The ultimate MacDash foal cheat code name. Never fails with a mane like that.

6917283 Indeed! | /-\ /\/\ 1337 \-\AXZ0R!

6917283 Lol tru

Here's to 4k+ views! Cheers guys and gals!

7070413 Point made. Fixing.

7232449 Fixed, Thanks.

I must say this is a vary good story I really like it.

7463201 Thanks, glad you enjoyed!

i hope there could be a sequel to this story

8338629 Well, I donno where I could go with this honestly. It's a storybook ending, and I kinda wanna keep it there.

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i understand can't blame me for hoping

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maybe a bonus chapter for when the foals are older. just one... maybe a small collection of ‘firsts’ or memories. Up to you though.

This story was just so beautiful (wipes a tear)!!!!!!!!

Really great read. Good job :)

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Well, this WAS only my first-ever published story (well, I did delete an early version of Destiny of a Forgotten Goddess, then revamped and republished it) which was written over 9 years ago (HOLY SHIT IM OLD), so its no surprise it's not the most well-written, even after giving the old girl some light touch-ups over the years. I was still getting all the intricacies of proper writing down then, and while I have certainly improved a lot since then, if I dare say, I am still learning with every project.

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One moment of weakness doesn't necessarily make it impossible to be a good mother. While not good for sure, her slip's not something that invalidates her future actions after its born.