Rainbow Dash gets a wing cramp while flying over Sweet Apple Acres, and has to make a crash landing. Good thing Big Macintosh is there to help! But things get a bit more heated then expected: pegasus wings are very sensitive to the touch...
5417484 Well, they ARE young adults, and young adults tend to get "physical" quite often. Add in a bi-yearly heat cycle, and it gets quite some more physical. Plus there's the fact they love each other, and like to show it physically as well as emotionally....
Overall, who knows if they're the most active couple! :D
I shouldn't say most active since they've obviously had long periods between fun at some points. But both always seems to have something to spice it up when it comes time.
5419996 Well, I can't exactly be having my readers read the Exact. Same. Thing. Over and over and over and over and...
You get the point.
I try to be innovative and constantly add new stuff in to make my story interesting and not so samey. Same reason I constantly update and improve previous chapters of the story - to make it better for new readers, and to make it more entertaining for those who like to re-read.
5568749 I've actually kinda run dry on ideas for this story at the moment, hence the massive delay. Plus, I've been dealing with real life and my other story, which I've been having constant inspiration for.
I'll update this eventually, when I get a good idea that isn't cliched as hell. I'll do some brainstorming, but no guarantees.
This story is so cute and adorable with lots of feels Please More Need more might be a strange and rarely heard ship but the way you write it makes it completely believable Like i could actually see it happening in connon provided they add some more Slice of life to it How would the Main 6 deal with a relationship or dating for that matter in cannon Eh but I'm rambling Keep up the good works Liked and Faved as well as tracking this story
5645222 I'm glad you think I portrayed them well as a couple, and made it believable. As for "more" - I have a few ideas and one partially written, but I'm kinda at a stand-still atm. As to the large delay, I'm not giving up on this story. I'm just kinda stuck right now on where to take it.
So is it too early in development to tell if the foals are pegasi or earth ponies?
The pregnancy last 11 months on equines species!... just saying!
5415192 A typical equine gestation period (for horses, more specifically), lasts about 320 ~ 365 days, according to a couple sources.
5412761 I'm stupid and forgot to add those details! Poo!
Fixed now.
MacinDash twins is a re-occurring theme :D
I love it
After that chapter (and well, story overall) it makes it hard to think anyone else has a better physical relationship in Equestria than these two. xD
5415909 Glad you liked that detail, and the chapter in general!
5417484 Well, they ARE young adults, and young adults tend to get "physical" quite often. Add in a bi-yearly heat cycle, and it gets quite some more physical. Plus there's the fact they love each other, and like to show it physically as well as emotionally....
Overall, who knows if they're the most active couple! :D
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I shouldn't say most active since they've obviously had long periods between fun at some points. But both always seems to have something to spice it up when it comes time.
5419996 Well, I can't exactly be having my readers read the Exact. Same. Thing. Over and over and over and over and...
You get the point.
I try to be innovative and constantly add new stuff in to make my story interesting and not so samey. Same reason I constantly update and improve previous chapters of the story - to make it better for new readers, and to make it more entertaining for those who like to re-read.
Anyhoo, til next chapter or comment!
New chap? :(
5568749 I've actually kinda run dry on ideas for this story at the moment, hence the massive delay. Plus, I've been dealing with real life and my other story, which I've been having constant inspiration for.
I'll update this eventually, when I get a good idea that isn't cliched as hell. I'll do some brainstorming, but no guarantees.
Thank you everypony for 2k+ views and 160+ likes! I'm glad you like this story, and I'll try to get a new chapter up..."soon".
This story is so cute and adorable with lots of feels Please More Need more might be a strange and rarely heard ship but the way you write it makes it completely believable Like i could actually see it happening in connon provided they add some more Slice of life to it How would the Main 6 deal with a relationship or dating for that matter in cannon Eh but I'm rambling Keep up the good works Liked and Faved as well as tracking this story
5645222 I'm glad you think I portrayed them well as a couple, and made it believable. As for "more" - I have a few ideas and one partially written, but I'm kinda at a stand-still atm. As to the large delay, I'm not giving up on this story. I'm just kinda stuck right now on where to take it.
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I hear yea on that. Keep up the good work I am sure you will find the way.
5648163 Thanks for the encouragement and kind words.