Rainbow Dash gets a wing cramp while flying over Sweet Apple Acres, and has to make a crash landing. Good thing Big Macintosh is there to help! But things get a bit more heated then expected: pegasus wings are very sensitive to the touch...
You did a great job as a whole and I very much enjoyed this fic. And I would very much like to see some scenes of them together after their married, maybe the wedding if you can! That'd be great!
...Though why did they not make a bigger deal about AJ and AB going at it? ...Is this a normal occurance? ...Why is it that those two are the perverts in the family? Ah well, whatever works for them I guess.
5074561 First off, thank you! Second, I definitely intend to detail at least time-frames of future events in the following chapter(s), possibly making a big portion of it for the wedding and... other important events.
... as to why they didn't get onto AB and AJ "havin' a li'l' fun", "They're apples to the core!" after all!
studded with pink (tourm) [tourmaline]. Not to hepped up about the AJ/AB part but then again it's your story. Still think it's a good one. to many of the[ inbred pervert farm pony] stories out there
You did a great job as a whole and I very much enjoyed this fic. And I would very much like to see some scenes of them together after their married, maybe the wedding if you can! That'd be great!
...Though why did they not make a bigger deal about AJ and AB going at it? ...Is this a normal occurance? ...Why is it that those two are the perverts in the family? Ah well, whatever works for them I guess.
5074561 First off, thank you! Second, I definitely intend to detail at least time-frames of future events in the following chapter(s), possibly making a big portion of it for the wedding and... other important events.
... as to why they didn't get onto AB and AJ "havin' a li'l' fun", "They're apples to the core!" after all!
Loved it, WEDDINGS yay
Other than there weird AB and AJ scene
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Glad you liked it!
Also, I mainly added the AJ and AB x AJ scenes to to add variation to the chapter, and possibly open up some spin-offs/bonus chapters for later.
Next chapter's up. Hope I did this part justice. There's at least one more planned and started, so look forward to that!
studded with pink (tourm) [tourmaline]. Not to hepped up about the AJ/AB part but then again it's your story. Still think it's a good one. to many of the[ inbred pervert farm pony] stories out there
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Did somebody order a firepony? Because we brought the cream to quench the fires of your desire.
This is so god damned adorable.
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Thanks, glad you liked it! Ah, one of my first stories...good times.