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Dr. Heinz Doofenshmirtz evil scientist and local resident of the tri-state has recently been sending angry letters to HASBRO for some strange reason Secret Agent Perry the Platypus must try and figure out why, only to discover that the evil Doctor is up to something more nefarious and evil then one could imagine.
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This is wonderful
, please continue.
I have mixed feelings about this fic.
First of all, your grammar and spelling makes me cringe. I have one word for you. Proofread. If you would have proofread it, you would have easily caught this...
...and changed it into something more to the tune of this:
Perry's tale begins as it usually does. He puts his hat on as his theme song plays in the background.
Did you really not have the extra time to read it over?
Now here is where I am really torn.
This is an eerily accurate depiction of a Phineas and Ferb episode(Well, the Perry half). You have the entire formula down pat, and I was even reading their lines in their voices. Everyone was in character, and I am actually pretty impressed. However, even though that was good, your English skills still urk the crap out of me.
Pretty decent fic. Remember to proofread. Keep writing.
In the short description, Secrwt and Platypus are spelled wrong, and the long description is lacking in punctuation.
That, and DerpyNate's comment make me hesitant to read this fic, despite this seeming interesting.
Semicolon, not comma.
*he goes down a slip-and-slide
Seriously Author. "Know Good"? NO. It's no.
Corporation, not cooperation.
"Seen you must noticed by now I have my Otherdimensioninator"? What?
*you're probably wondering
* 'Why do I have my Otherdimensioninator out.'
Seasons.
*Prejudiced
*bringing
You know what? I don't have time for this. I'll continue tomorrow.
I shall be waiting for the debut of agent P.
AKA Pinkie the Pony. Sorry, Perry.
Agent B, Angle The Bunny.
You need to work on your spelling and grammar, but you got the PNF feel down to a T and have them all in character.
Ok this is just as I expected but please make sure your grammer isn't to noticable. I want this to succeed.
okay now this is good quality crossover worth to watch
"Reads title"
Great, now I HAVE to read this.
This is bloody amazing so far.
needs editing pretty badly, otherwise its ok, please find an editor tho
hahahaha!!! Best ever!!!!!
It's been well over a year, any plans to continue this? :D
I think it should be a tale of comedy.
When I was asleep I remembered what Doof said, "my only friend was the moon, and my neighbor kenny" I just imagined my mom (Luna) watching down on Gimmlstump as a young boy was constantly mistreated and overshadowed by his brother, then grew up to be an evil scientist. Years later, when Luna returned from the moon, She goes into the dreams of Dr. Doof, and Convince him to talk to his brother... (I think this just started a headcannon fic prompt)
The TakeTwilightsWingsAwayanator of course. Hilarious
A good start so far. I hope to see more ... eventually.