A long time ago in a Galaxy far, far away
STAR WARS
It is a time of great turmoil and civil war in the Emprie.
After the death of Emperor Palpatine the once mighty empire that spanned across the galaxy is now in turmoil divided among the various warlords who would rather fight amongst each other than serve the greater good of the empire. However one has emerged among the ranks to bring knew hope to this once glorious civilization. A chiss officer who's skills and intelligence has helped him rise to the rank of Grand Admiral has returned to the known universe as now commands the Star Destroyer Chimera which is now posted near the horseshoe sector. But it will take a great deal of the skill and intelligence and a great deal of magic in order to "persuade" these warlords to re-join the Empire.
Didn't read, don't plan on it. Telling you that people don't like center justify.
You have some spelling errors, but otherwise it seems like it can be a good story.
THRAWN...IN...MLP? TAKE ALL MY LIKE
i cant wait to see were this gose he was my fav hero in empire at foc outher then tyber zann
You need a proofreader.
Please, get a proofreader.
I like this so far...I like it quite a bit.
this would be so much better if you could fix all those grammar mistakes
I will continue to follow this. It's promising, but you do need to find a proofreader. As someone who is currently reading the Thrawn Trilogy, I can say that you seem to (at least from what I could glean from this chapter) have gotten the characters of Thrawn and Palleon down well. The spelling for the most part is good, too. I must reiterate, although I like the premise (as far as I know, this is the only Star Wars crossover with Thrawn), it is painful to read due to the grammar.
I wish you the best in your continued writing.
Rush and Pony on!
T4E
I think you're doing a pretty good job representing Thrawn, however, I recommend caution.
Thrawn on Equestria, better not let him meet Discord.
is this story dead ?
6695532 IDK probably...It is in terms of Canon in Star Wars lol
6695534 yeah lol
Will you update.
update? Thrawn is canon now.
I find your lack of spelling Rainbow Dash, disturbing
Though your writing needs improving, I love how your writing Thrawn and his love for other cultures.
Please update.
Can you please update? I love this story.