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Praeco Nigrum
What is the life of one? One can change the world... One can change everything... Are you that One? Only you can know...
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Great Job!
4743423 thanks!
I have to day overall well done, i'm going to be following personally.
One thing though is that there were a few spelling/grammatical errors here and there, nothing major but if you want a person to read over your chapters before you post them im available.
4763133 thank you, and thanks that would be great :)
For most of these it was just myself looking through them and correcting what I could... You know how that goes XD
So your help would be great :)
You may want to show the change of perspective with a line break or something.
4765457 I will go and change the chapters in a sec... I just forgot to add those for these earlier chapters... Whoops XD
4765489 I'll only be able to help with basic stuff like this. I would help with editing but I know absolutely nothing about grammar and nearly failed English.
4765499 thanks anyway :) I just went through and put in the perspective changes where they were needed any way :)
So his name is basically Darth Body?
4798347 his name actually translates to that yes, but it also means corpse and a few other things... But yes, essentially that is true XD
Everything during and after the encounter with the gryphon is underlined, Everything.
4798408 thank you for letting me know, i'll fix that right now.... lol
4799339 Fixed!
>Title has words "Dark Knight"
>Not Batman
Eh.
(Yes, I know it's Star Wars and I might give it a read sometime. Just wanted to point that out.)
4799709 LOL, I wasn't even thinking of that when I wrote up the title for this story... XD thanks for pointing that out, but I'm not entirely sure it should be changed...
To everyone else... Do you think it should be changed?
This is pretty good.
4800030 Thanks
4801258 will do, I already have many chapters ready in advance... Just that this will be updated a little later that the original site it's posted on
I DEMAND MOAR!!
4804008 Soon... soon... Patience apprentice and you shall have the galaxy.... Maybe...
4804577 wait what hey i already control solsthime
4804939 I meant the new galaxy... The one I have created with THESE WORDS MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
4804976 *hits you with a stick*no cheating magic words only the first dragonborn can do that MuHahahahahahahahahahha
4805946 damn... He's right! BREAK OUT THE REALITY RAY....we have a dragon born to capture.....
4806461 you are not very bright are you
4806914 .... Damn... Forgot the reality ray doesn't exist yet.... Well, back to the drawing board....
4807759 you will never catch me
4811043 hmmm... Maybe if I get the... Nah that's a little overkill... But... Maybe
4811189 FUS RO!
4815544 DEATH STAR DAH!
4817715 JOL
You've gotten though and thou mixed up at some points
4827456 whoops! I'll fix those soon :D
A steel(?) sword can block a lightsaber? Sure, why not.
Also, You better not do what I think you might do with that griffon...
4827506 Um if I remember correctly I have it to where enchanted swords can block lightsabers, something to do with magic and shite XD
And what might that be?
4827536
Magic! You don't need to explain shite!!
Also, are the ponies and griffons using steel or iron weapons? Iron is generally used for the Equestria of a thousand years ago and sometimes present as well.
4827599 hmm, I think I will be using the iron weapons... Seeing as I haven't specified yet what they use :)
... What the buck?
4878113 ... I don't know... But I'll fix it!
4881019 Schweet.
4881402 alright fixed and updated in one go XD
That was the first bucking chapter and it was amazing! It was even factually correct in the minor details of the SWU! YOU ARE MY NEW FAVOURITE PERSON!
4887621 thank you! That is extremely kind of you sir!
I hope you will also enjoy the rest of the story as I have tried to keep it as close to fact as possible 
Being a Gryphon, Aurora is actually a quadruped, not a biped as you wrote.
4887983 Aye, But she was using her wings to stand up on her hind legs, so that she could use her front claws effectively in the duel... Um... Did I state that or not... If not let me know and i'll fix it right away!
Amazing story
4895254 thank you!
Nicely done
4919592 Thank you!
I'm surprised by the AN, this story seemed too lighthearted for that... Oh well, not many things on the Web can disgust me at this point so I can't wait for the next chapter.