A man with no way to leave decides that saving a dark princess is worth more than the temptations of the dark... But can he save her from the same darkness he has forsaken for her? Meet DARTH Corpus... A man of almost intangible powers as he marches
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Great Job!
4743423 thanks!
I have to day overall well done, i'm going to be following personally.
One thing though is that there were a few spelling/grammatical errors here and there, nothing major but if you want a person to read over your chapters before you post them im available.
4763133 thank you, and thanks that would be great :)
For most of these it was just myself looking through them and correcting what I could... You know how that goes XD
So your help would be great :)
I feel happy for them :)
I'm incredibly late finding this story but... huh... this is actually pretty good to read. 13 light sabers seems a bit much to me but you mentioned they were trophies (In a different way) So hell I'm okay with it. You've done rather well so far with blending the SWU And MLP Universe together so far. And to go THIS far back, I've only had one other story I've read so far that went so far, and I've loved it so far. So... you have my interest. I'll be reading a few more chapters before giving it a favorite or thumb up simply to make sure it'll remain interesting.
Have a force COOKIE
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yay (enters darth vaders house for cookies)
"Poultry" - Bird
"Paltry" - Small or Meagre, implies insufficient.