A man with no way to leave decides that saving a dark princess is worth more than the temptations of the dark... But can he save her from the same darkness he has forsaken for her? Meet DARTH Corpus... A man of almost intangible powers as he marches
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4881402 alright fixed and updated in one go XD
4887621 thank you! That is extremely kind of you sir! I hope you will also enjoy the rest of the story as I have tried to keep it as close to fact as possible
4887983 Aye, But she was using her wings to stand up on her hind legs, so that she could use her front claws effectively in the duel... Um... Did I state that or not... If not let me know and i'll fix it right away!
Amazing story
4895254 thank you!
The only thing I think this story really needs is an editor. There are quite a few mistakes spelling and grammar wise, otherwise this is a good read!
I’m gonna be a 100% honest, this chapter was good, the fighting was exiting, but You are telling me that he fought around 400 soldiers with little injuries BUT WHEN HE RUN TOWARDS THE FOAL HE BEND AN ANKLE AND POP AND ARTERIE???? Common, if you wanted to give him this injuries at least make him gain this wounds by fighting