• Member Since 19th May, 2014
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Dr Equinox


Nice,creative guy who enjoys normal AND strange/weird things.

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[SOON TO BE RE-WRITTEN]

Luna has lived for a long time. In this incredible lifespan of hers she has never found a suitor that would fit her desires.

She does not desire the normal. She desires the strange, weird, the unwanted of the lot. Fortunately for her, he comes around often. He often tells her "I don't know how long I'll take, but I'll come back"

To which she always ask "Promise me you'll come back?"

The answer is inside.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 6 )

He better not die.

Also just a few grammatical errors, other than that grate job so far.

5871654

You've given me an idea for the future.
;)

Pretty good, some grammar issues here and there and some context issues. otherwise great start.

Also

I write my chapters on my phone and they turn out just fine; Just gotta read through it on the a computer before posting. ;)
:yay:

5875727 So far I am loving this story. Same as last just got some grammar issues. BUT otherwise you have a good start here. If you revise it you could easily make this a 4000 word chapter. :moustache:

Well only one pony calls her "Sister" in the show. I think its pretty obvious who it is. Unless this is one of those fics that brings in non canon family which is just fine with me. I'm a reader with an open mind when it comes to these fics for sure.

Great chapter! Glad to see this still going! Looking forward to future chapters. Be well. :eeyup:

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