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BronyofMeddlers


Just a writer going through on life with a couple of meddlers passing by.

Comments ( 88 )

Past tense. Ownership. You need to learn how to do both. Though points for putting out so many words.

4418995 yeah like I said this is my wasteland story. Honestly I try making this story present tense, since well why not? However sometime I get my tense's wrong whenever I type. Something Im trying to improve. Still thanks for pointing out that ownership part since it skip pass my mind.

I've only read a bit of this chapter, and I can definitely say it needs some work. I'd be happy to proofread or edit for you, it looks like it could be a decent story if polished up a bit.

4420454 really thanks man, I'll send you the link through pm, again thank you.

Clop chapter imminent. Jk. Anyhoo. It's been a great story so far. :D do hope for good ol sex scene though, also jk. 10/10 chapter story of his sister was sad to. :(

4455516 I want to thank you for commenting on this story and for you to view this so awesomely, again thank you, so what your thoughts on this story so far?

4461658 huh, I'll be honest, I wasn't expecting a comment like this one, and thanks for faving this story and for some reason watching me.

I watch all the people who do fallout 3/vegas crossovers

Still haven't stopped laughing from lily spanking him:rainbowlaugh:

4803006 when somebody snaps, they show how crazy they're really are.

4990932 the story is good but can you make a new story with a human-harems:rainbowkiss:

4990960 if you would kindly turn your attention to my other stories with a w in the beginning you will see on, more slow pace but will promise a harem in the long run. Be warn that the beginning part might not make sense somewhat, thankfully Im waiting for editor to finish editing.

You know honestly I thought you'd abandoned this fic. I'm so glad you didn't though!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

5063403 your welcome, sorry it took a while college and all that jazz.

5064097 please, no way I abandon something like that, beside the amounts of fav certainly help me out, and playing fallout again as well.

Somehow you modded your fallout story in the aftermath of the game with holy frag time bombs

5066704 okay I'll be honest I made that up, I don't know if it's mod or not, but the first thing that came to mind was holy frag grenades in a form of bomb would be consider dangerous. Basically I just throw stuff on the wall and see what sticks.

5070276 no spoliers! But a hint I will allow, awkward bow chicka wow wow.

5070538 It may take a while since college is taking most of my time, but I will try to do my best!

Well... i'm not a grammar nazi or anything but the writing in this is just... bad. Maybe i'll read this after it has been fixed. :applejackunsure:

5248381 Yeah, I'm starting to edit the grammar on word...IT's suppose to be present tense story.

Get this edited and cut some of the fluff out and you might have something. You're heads in the right area but your just a bit out of reach.

5263950 Thanks, honestly I'm juggling with editing something else, making something else, and just staying awake. But'll get to this soon.

I like this story, but I'm afraid this is where I get off the train.
'Steps off of the train.'
'Waves goodbye while saying' I am sorry, but human on pony sex is not my thing.
'I then turn around and continue to wander the waste.'

5400358 Well it does have romance and I thank you for giving me your reason on why you don't want to read it, Your possibly one of the rare people who give me a good reason on why they dislike this story at all.

5401703 I do not dislike it. In fact I find it funny and awesome. But one of my biggest pet peeves when it comes to these fan fics is human on pony sex. For some stories I can suck it up and keep reading. Which is why, I will wait till the next chapter is out. If I read through it and like what I see, I will keep reading. However, if I do not, I shall leave you with my like, but not read anymore.

5402854 Understandable, and I thank you for not assuming that it would be easy for dear old meddler to be in love again with the heroines in this tale.

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