5180729 I see you read through this. Are you prepare to read more?

Wohoo this is gonna be good.

I don't know but I just decided to skip all the dramatic part, it was quite unnecessary, like we already understood he was dealing with something? Why all that overdramatic dark stuff, especially with courier 6 which atleast for me is a perfect stoic character in all his dialogue (so that you can prove your motivations through actions). It just seemed really out of character and weird. And also you decided to constantly say the name of the Main Character, something that the writers at fnv never had to do, I don't understand why you had to repeat his name so much. One rare mention here and there is fine, but if you want to still seem realistic in the fallout universe you can't really mention it a lot. Especially since people in fallout are really bad at remembering names, they mostly remember titles, Ceasar, The burning man, Legate, the vault dweller, the chosen one. It is still a better novel than most, just had some weird decisions.