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This is good so far, and I can't wait to read more of it.
Okay. You need an editor. A proofreader. Someone to help check the spelling and flow of the story.
I'm trying alright
7779020 Yes, proofread the chaps. It's a good start, but it needs to be proofread...
... kinda sounds like my story XD (probably not XD(I don't know why I love XDs XD))
On a serious note, it's got good potential but grammatically speaking, the lack of proofreading or the abundance of errors takes away from the story.
The idea of the story is good but I think Frankie2 nailed it because it doesn't flow too well.
I rather like this story, its not the normal, human x princess thing... Maybe a proof reader will do some good. If ya need one just pm me.
Yeah mate, you really need to learn to spell.
Not bad I like it
awesome chapter my friend I can't wait for more chapters to b uploaded I'll b waiting my friend and keep me posted
7779039 you cant just try you must try harder like this inspirational video
[youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=U9t-slLl30E]
It's a good idea, but... the g-grammar... it's so bad...
Should probably link the artist for the cover art.
Awesome chapter my friend and I can't wait for the next upload for this story I'll be waiting
*looks at the cover art*
( start at 23:43 and end at 23:45)
Is it dead?
Woah holy sh#t that's a bit of a jump.
Yeah so does the little Dragon you keep around. Difference is that muthafucka will grow up to be a big muthafucka that'll be much more dangerous.