this was actually rather enjoyable

this time with 100% more pretentious latin chapter titles!

This is my fetish.

...Bravo. I would like to see more of these in the future. There are just not enough Big Mac x Cheerilee nowadays.

Nice chemistry between the two

I loved it all it had a lot of sweat and cute moments and don't forget sexy.I'm so happy that there finely together.it was perfect.I hope that there will be a sequel of this maybe while she is in heat.

*applause*

I actually followed you ages ago and am very glad I did, because your other erotic stories so far have been fantastic, but this one might be the best of the lot. I really adore a good Cheerilee/Mac story and this was a great way to follow up on a great episode about them.

Only error I found was this:

She felt a quiver of excitement, like a bolt of lightning shooting up her spine. Oh, Sisters, I need fucked so badly right now.

Missing a couple of words in the second sentence there.

Keep up the fantastic work.
--CG

Finally read it.
Bravo DoorKnob. Nice lil' Cheerimac story.

Good job!

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Thanks! I really enjoy your work, too. "Scientific Interest" is one of my favorite fics on the site.

What exactly are the errors in the second sentence? If you mean the "Sisters," that's just an oath like "God," or "Goddamn," in reference to Luna and Celestia.

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The error is "I need fucked"

She needs TO BE fucked.

Glad you like PSI.

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I think it's "I need fucked so badly" is what's wrong.

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I plead colloquialism, your honors. (fixed)

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English, pór fàvor.

Wow, that was quite the story. Way to go Big Mac.

Drunk Cheerilee is a silly, sexy drunk.

...this story was so awesome.....

This is truly one of the best MacXCheerilee fics I've read.

Hello NoSillyDoorknob

Do you plan to continue this story?
Would be interesting.