The Best Anniversary Ever

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Bambisbb

Bambisbb #1 · Dec 2nd, 2013 · 1 · ·

...................I like it.

Shadowrain1000

Shadowrain1000 #2 · Dec 2nd, 2013 · · ·

Hot AND funny!

TheAlmightySage

TheAlmightySage #3 · Dec 2nd, 2013 · · ·

Hyperactive ball of ADD

Jake The Army Guy

Jake The Army Guy #4 · Dec 2nd, 2013 · · ·

VERY, very nice! I have to admit, the last scene, I was soooooooo waiting for the twins to start crying or something. But this was... just great, man. The sex was passionate, the emotions were real, and the comedy timing was just hilarious. For real, this is the kind of thing I point people to when I explain that a clopfic can still have weight and a real story beyond the mindless fucking.

Even though the mindless fucking really was great.

JetstreamGW

JetstreamGW #5 · Dec 2nd, 2013 · · ·

Heh. That was pretty funny. I do confess to the teensiest amount of disappointment that it wasn't Pinkie x Cakes at the end though ;)

I half expected that she was doing it on purpose.

Atropony

Atropony #6 · Dec 2nd, 2013 · 2 · ·

Whats a Grumpalufaguses? I don't think that's a real thing but I kinda want it to be.... also a big ole A+ to this story... though I don't think Clopfics are really my thing.

Blazing Sword

Blazing Sword #7 · Dec 4th, 2013 · 1 · ·

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I, personally, was ecpecting her to walk in on them as they finished, and shed roll her eyes and xay something along the lines of "well, why didn't you just say you wanted to fuck? "

Princess Cadence

Princess Cadence #8 · Dec 4th, 2013 · · ·

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A Grumpalufaguses is a way to get rid of Pinkie Pie's when Twilight needs to.

Princess Cadence

Princess Cadence #9 · Dec 4th, 2013 · · ·

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Yeah, but that would have been too predictable.

Roman Empire

Roman Empire #10 · Dec 5th, 2013 · · ·

That was terrific! I wanted to believe that making sure they had explosive orgasms was Pinkie's plan, or that Twilight's gift was GETTING RID of Pinkie for them. I was surprised that the ending went exactly as could be expected. It's been... a long time since a story caught me off guard at the end.

Ogrepony