Hearts, Hooves, and Hard Liquor

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OtakuBr0n1

OtakuBr0n1 #1 · May 24th, 2014 · · · In Vino Coitus ·

this was actually rather enjoyable

Farnham

Farnham #2 · May 24th, 2014 · 9 · · In Vino Coitus ·

this time with 100% more pretentious latin chapter titles!

This is my fetish.

Ebony Stallion

Ebony Stallion #3 · May 24th, 2014 · 4 · · In Vino Coitus ·

...Bravo. I would like to see more of these in the future. There are just not enough Big Mac x Cheerilee nowadays.

Master king

Master king #4 · May 24th, 2014 · 1 · 8 · In Vino Veritas ·

First of all FIRST!!!!!!Second I loved it all it was awesome , sweat,funny and cute.I loved getting to know more about there past and present.And even without the love potion you can see that they where meant to be together.I can't wait to see what happens between them both next and what happens to them both next.

The Diplomat

The Diplomat #5 · May 24th, 2014 · · · In Vino Coitus ·

Nice chemistry between the two

Master king

Master king #6 · May 24th, 2014 · · · In Vino Coitus ·

I loved it all it had a lot of sweat and cute moments and don't forget sexy.I'm so happy that there finely together.it was perfect.I hope that there will be a sequel of this maybe while she is in heat.

CarcinoGeneticist

CarcinoGeneticist #7 · May 24th, 2014 · 1 · · In Vino Coitus ·

*applause*

I actually followed you ages ago and am very glad I did, because your other erotic stories so far have been fantastic, but this one might be the best of the lot. I really adore a good Cheerilee/Mac story and this was a great way to follow up on a great episode about them.

Only error I found was this:

She felt a quiver of excitement, like a bolt of lightning shooting up her spine. Oh, Sisters, I need fucked so badly right now.

Missing a couple of words in the second sentence there.

Keep up the fantastic work.
--CG

LtMajorDude

LtMajorDude #8 · May 24th, 2014 · · · In Vino Coitus ·

Finally read it.
Bravo DoorKnob. Nice lil' Cheerimac story.

Good job!

NoSillyDoorknob

NoSillyDoorknob #9 · May 24th, 2014 · · · In Vino Coitus ·

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Thanks! I really enjoy your work, too. "Scientific Interest" is one of my favorite fics on the site.

What exactly are the errors in the second sentence? If you mean the "Sisters," that's just an oath like "God," or "Goddamn," in reference to Luna and Celestia.

CarcinoGeneticist