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There once was a mare from Nantucket...

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You have my interest.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Why do I have a feeling at the end of this the two are going to knock each other up :trixieshiftright:

pld do one where twi drinks insted of dash make dash feel like a true mare if ya know what i mean :rainbowwild:

Wow! That had me sweating. I thought Rainbow was sweet in her satisfying Twilight
keep it and me, up.

To her satisfaction, she could fit entirely inside Twilight, her balls finally touching the unicorn’s skin.

Well, there's something you don't see every day.
Or even think of.
Even maybe once a year.

More please and thank you. It's a bit short but it does everything juuuust right.

Slice of life... this is not Slice of life. Comedy maybe, romance might fit, but not slice of life.

What episode is the cover picture from?

Welp, I read it.
The whole thing.
And you know what?
Not half bad.

Well, assuming the progression, next one is gonna be m/m. Let's see how you pull that off :rainbowlaugh:
Also wondering if Dash isn't wondering how it would feel if she was the mare herself... Role reversal!

Love it love it love it but needs m/m or Twilight bucking Dashi (plz no Stallion/Stallion):rainbowwild::twilightblush:

I believe it is a small edit of the scene taken from Season 1 Episode 13 - Fall Weather Friends where Rainbow Dash is scoffing at Twilight's participating in the Running of the Leaves. It's around the 11m:00s mark of the episode. :rainbowlaugh: :twilightangry2: :rainbowderp:

Yeah I wasn't sure about the tags. SOL was the closest to "Generic" I could think of. I can swap it to romance I guess.

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I'm planning to do a chapter for each matchup.

ohhh...i see what you did there...well, at least all over my floor.:twilightsmile:

Saliva contains DNA. Second half of the chapter is useless :twilightsmile: Twi should know that.


Because that would actually be an interesting read. Imagine having to explain that to parents and friends. "Yeah, we found a potion that...well... We're pregnant, with each other's foals."

THAT would be an interesting SOL story.

2573316 Not so! She also said she wanted to see if it was fully functional! She'd want to know if Rainbow could actually produce sperm.

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

2573316 It's clop, don't ask for logic...

See could also test the semen for sperm cells and, proving they were alive and swimmin', investigate to see if it was able to produce offspring. Sex and science just go hand in hand, don't they?

Or should I say hoof in hoof...?:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:


At this point in the fandom I'm pretty sure that RD's superpower is growing a dick.

:rainbowdetermined2: Magical penis powers, ACTIVATE!

Collage ain't got NOTHIN' on what these two have planned.:trollestia:

“I want—” Twilight screamed into her pillow, as Rainbow’s balls slapped against the tiny button of her clit over and over. “I want you to cum inside me. Cum in me, Rainbow! Fill me up! Please!”

Hmmm, that's backwards Twi ...

you'd better swap the genders, and not make it stallion/stallion:trixieshiftright:

I like how your profile pic is looking at the story saying "Mother of God..."

Anyways, good stuff. Thumbs up from me :twilightsmile:

“Besides, aren’t you curious?”

Extremely. “Not really...”

I laughed SO freakin hard at that part :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Very nice and sexy little story you have here. Always nice to find more of my fellow authors writing good-quality erotica. Sounds like you've got more parts coming up, too? I shall look forward to them with great interest, it'll be nice to take it all in as one complete story.

Keep up the sweet sweet sexiness.


...Yes, please.

Let me get the antagonist


TwiDash and sex. Doesn't get much better than this. Reminds me quite a bit of that one story by the Wizard of Words. If this goes through the full rotation, it will certainly be an interesting set of experiences.

2571945 It's clearly an adventure. :rainbowlaugh:

You had me at the Kafka reference.

oh god, They aren't going to.....
we think so....
(jk, I don't really mind, I just find it a little odd that Twilight will do this too.)

"Rainbow Dash woke one morning to discover she had transformed into a giant bug. With a dick."

Yeah, something gives me the feeling that fic is out there, somewhere.

that stallion potion + potion enhancing sensitivity (for both of them) + stamina potions = :heart:

2576115 sounds more like a Kafka + Freud thing (I may have spelled that wrong :rainbowhuh:). So I'm guessing next is Twilight doing Rainbow, well Zecora is going to get two very regular customers :pinkiecrazy:.


The Metamorphosis opening is still my favorite story start ever. There's not enough surreal stories like that.

Never gunna get used to the line "her cock" :rainbowlaugh:
All in all, good read so far.

Well, that was very good.

very good.

Yeah....do this match-up again. Hell just start involving the whole mane six into these shenanigans. This is an awesome story.


The usual nega-space he's in for these fics. Somewhere between Carousel Boutique, Canterlot, and with the CMCs.

Or watching somewhere in the Library if the author is cruel.

Gender potions? Two tastes that taste great together! ...if you know what I mean.

2580233 Hmm... That raises the question, what would happen if you drank them both together?

And don't worry, I know what you mean. :eeyup:

2574167Indeed. Whomever said science isn't, ah, fun?

I don't usually upfave M/M clop.
But when do, I upvote TwiDash.

Dos Equis. Stay brony, my friends.

Shoving all the way forward, Rainbow leaned down over Twilight’s back,

Dayum, RD is flexible. Leaning over top of Twilight when shes on bottom? :pinkiegasp:

All of my yes. :raritystarry:

first was RD Male alone, than RD Male with Twilight, than Twilight Male with Female RD, than Male both of them. How much you all wanna bet that the last chapter is gonna be F/F?

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