Hard Days Work

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Ron Jeremy Pony

Ron Jeremy Pony #1 · Jul 9th, 2014 · · ·

Surprisingly I haven't found an over abundance of Cheerilee and Big Mac stories. So thank you for taking the road less traveled.

- LF

RandomHamster33

RandomHamster33 #2 · Jul 9th, 2014 · · ·

A bit fast and poorly edited. But still, not too bad.

Azure Ravenscroft

Azure Ravenscroft #3 · Jul 9th, 2014 · 1 · ·

There are far too many unnecessary commas throughout and the editing (if there was any) was poor. You should invest in a reliable pre-reader with English as a first language if you want success in the future. Just keep trying and you should get the hang of this

IGNORE IGNORE

IGNORE IGNORE #4 · Jul 10th, 2014 · · ·

4668903 I would but idk how to get one. oh well ill guess ill just keep trying

OBSIDI4N_DR4G0N

OBSIDI4N_DR4G0N #5 · Jul 10th, 2014 · · ·

well, talk about quickie

Azure Ravenscroft

Azure Ravenscroft #6 · Jul 10th, 2014 · · ·

4669283 just ask around, someone eventually will want to help but I know what you mean about it being tough to find someone reliable

RainbowGlaze

RainbowGlaze #7 · Jul 11th, 2014 · · ·

No much description of the amazing feeling you get when you cum, maybe that's why I didn't enjoy the story as much as I thought I would? Yeah probably, nice job anyway!