- Member Since 13th Dec, 2013
- offline last seen Jun 12th, 2015
Surry
A pool boy by trade. A rocker at heart. A writer by soul. And not afraid to show my face.
Surry
Joined 13th Dec, 2013 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Surry · 1k words · 24 19 · 489 views
- Surry · 4.1k words · 48 2 · 1.3k views
- afakebrony · 12k words · 77 5 · 1.8k views
- Surry · 2.3k words · 85 2 · 2.3k views
Featured In11
Clopfics11,552 stories ·15,818 members
The Writers' Group56,464 stories ·9,300 members
Dark8,331 stories ·3,768 members
Supporting Original Characters4,079 stories ·1,827 members
The Group That Is Pretty Much Every Other Group Combined9,871 stories ·924 members
Romance is Magic!5,380 stories ·1,723 members
Lilith911's "Special" House48 stories ·218 members
Original Character Stories296 stories ·130 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.12 seconds
Total duration
857 users online
1,392,112 hits today, 2,782,760 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
well I like the plot for this... although it wouldn't mean the end of the pony race, in our world right now, two women are all that's needed to make a baby, SCIENCE! and I'm liking the relationship that's forming between these two. I'm guessing that this will be a multy chapter fic? ether way I liked it.
another good job.
I feel like there should not be an 'only' there otherwise i see absolutely nothing wrong here.
this was... amazing!!!!!!!!!! New chapter, please!
Eenope. An this is why I like being a unicorn. Don't fuck with the unicorns.
Wow! This was absolutely fantastic! You never fail to amaze me, Surry. This is just absolutely amazing. I love the story, I'm in love with Ruby as a character in general, and I'm highly curious what this machine will be like. I'm curious what Ruby's actual escape plan will be. Will the room smell like sex? Will the other mares even recognize it as that? Rarity eats 6 pints of ice cream and... The plot thickens!
Song sort of relevant.
I listened to Tool while I was reading this, and it worked pretty well as ambiance.
Rape is, by definition, non-consentual. Therefore, consenual rape, machine or so, is a complete impossiblity. It is either machine rape or consentual machine sex, but not both.
4401994 *consensual
4401994 commentsmeme.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/Funny-Graphics-7512.jpg
Wait a moment, is he really one of the seven remaining male they have? And she really risked to KILL HIM?! BULL*****
Crazy at best
I want MOAR!!!! That was great, all things considered, including grammar. Like, fave, and follow for you.
This is too much like freakin Brave New World for me
4417943 Oh... sorry to hear that.
Don't be. I just hope it will end better than suicide
4401111
Ha. Ha.
4422067 Lol.
I'm glad someone finally commented on that. I thought that was the most clever joke I've written. 
4422130
4401111 Up-up... just got it. Chuckled.
4422151 Also, how I imagined your comment in my head:
4422169 uuummm... Hey can you pre read my (1st) fanfic for me?
4422186 I suppose so. How long is it?
4422380 not that long. I have a bit of a writer's block.
4422392 PM me.
4422488 I'm already neck-deep in it.
4422492 Oh, alright then. I suppose I'm unnecessary.
4422534 Bullshit. You're always necessary.
4422546 I meant as a second prereader. I wasn't belittling myself. Lol. My role as a prereader for this particular story is unnecessary.
4422555 Well, I'm helping him with things like word flow, show versus tell, inner monologues, dialogue flow... yadda yadda yadda.
4422570 I'm a girl
4422534 Your necessary! I need a wide range of opinions!
4422596 Apologies. Noted.
4422616 it's fine. There seems to be more Bronies than Pegusisters.
4422622 You'd be correct.
eeyup
4422657
I demand an update. This is essential to the survival of humanity.
Give us more or I'll break out the torches and pitchforks
Interesting, and not just for the clop. I wonder... You wouldn't happen to have a small novel set in a hyper matriarchal, socialist, diarchal dystopia in you, would you?
Maybe even if the end game is just getting away and letting the society collapse on itself.