Twilight and Rainbow sit down at a nice restaurant one night, and have a bit of trouble with dessert.
Chapters (1)
- Member Since 13th Dec, 2013
- offline last seen Jun 12th, 2015
Surry
A pool boy by trade. A rocker at heart. A writer by soul. And not afraid to show my face.
Surry
Joined 13th Dec, 2013 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Surry · 1.1k words · 49 8 · 1.5k views
- Verum Nexum · 2.2k words · 105 7 · 2.6k views
- Vex · 4.8k words · 124 4 · 3.2k views
- Surry · 1.1k words · 264 27 · 5.2k views
- Kodeake · 6.8k words · 224 3 · 5.4k views
- Intet22 · 4.3k words · 172 7 · 5k views
- Quick Wit -Littlepip- · 5.3k words · 141 7 · 4.8k views
- ssjgokillo · 9.5k words · 126 14 · 3.1k views
Featured In8
The Writers' Group56,340 stories ·9,284 members
Rainbow Dash7,251 stories ·4,139 members
TwiDash1,187 stories ·4,224 members
Cryosite2,675 stories ·252 members
Free Twilight Sparkle!5,201 stories ·1,223 members
The Twidash Army532 stories ·567 members
Stories on Goodreads28,595 stories ·492 members
Adda's Bookshelves1,852 stories ·69 members
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.129 seconds
Total duration
1,104 users online
2,118,181 hits today, 2,814,898 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
awh, this was super sweet!
Yeah... I'm lame... But otherwise great story
Very Yes
4427781 Thanks, homie.
4427814
Yay!
*looks at watch* Something is seriously wrong with this thing. It's going too fast. And I'm pretty sure the hour hand is going backwards.
Call the harmony patrol, Discord's at it again.
haven't gotten to read it yet, but someone had to do this...
4428190 Perhaps your humor is too advanced for me, but did I make a mistake or something?
4428203 You mentioned night, then day, then evening, in that order. It's rather confusing, and it's hard to tell exactly what time it is.
4428223 Fixed.
4428223
Day can refer to the entire 24 hour unit, not just the bright half. Evening would probably be the better word, though.
Wut. I totally thought she was going to propose. Not commit dessert heresy...
4428288 Sorry about that.
This was a fantastic bedtime story! Thank you Surry!
Soo much YAY.
4428681 No probs.
4428979
This seems... unprofessional.
4431267 Seeing as I'm not a professional, I don't get what the problem is.
4431475 I'll give you that. Nevertheless, I know I'm not the only one who sees it that way. If consider changing it, but it's up to you.
Surry wrights another awesome story while I'm unable to continue my terrible one.
Nice job though, I totally thought Twi was gonna propose.
4431491 Sorry, but I've changed enough things about my stories for my readers, and I think I'm gonna' let this one slide. I appreciate your input, though.
4431532 What's sad is... I have another one coming out tonight...
She's my cherry pie cool drink of water such a sweet surprise
Tastes so good make a grown man cry sweet cherry pie
She's my cherry pie put a smile on your face
Ten miles wide Looks so good
Bring a tear to your eye Sweet cherry pie
4428202 you beat me to it...
4432190 He does that. A lot.
4432190
4432195
4432199 m'kay. I'll upvote that comment.
4432199 thriller guy laugh and joker
So awesome!
4432163 for some reason, I can't help but notice how perfectly your avatar fits with that comment...
4428202 Dam it I was going to do that.
4432330 Yes, I love my avi.
Sounds like Heaven isn't too far away...
Adorable!
A.....W...E....S....O...M....E
and really funny
I finally got around to reading this, It's another good story Surry.
Nice.
Great Story, too bad Twi didn't propose though.
I though it was
cumcoming..Never mind that was a horrible pun.
Awwwwwwwwww! Twily's being nice. Dashie's eating a lot of sugar. So where's Pinkie? Have a like and a fav, Surry. You are one of the great TwiDash authors out there.
A little confused, why did Twilight not want Rainbow to have the sundae? Unhealthy? or mess up her dress? idk either way I loved it though