• Member Since 13th Dec, 2013
  • offline last seen Jun 12th, 2015

Surry


A pool boy by trade. A rocker at heart. A writer by soul. And not afraid to show my face.

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Twilight and Rainbow sit down at a nice restaurant one night, and have a bit of trouble with dessert.

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awh, this was super sweet! :pinkiehappy:

Yeah... I'm lame... But otherwise great story :twilightsmile:

4427781 Thanks, homie. :yay:


4427814 :yay: Yay!

It was a cool, dark night in Canterlot on one quiet Winter's day, and a large portion of the city's unicorns had already turned in for the evening.

*looks at watch* Something is seriously wrong with this thing. It's going too fast. And I'm pretty sure the hour hand is going backwards.

Call the harmony patrol, Discord's at it again.

haven't gotten to read it yet, but someone had to do this...

4428190 Perhaps your humor is too advanced for me, but did I make a mistake or something?

4428203 You mentioned night, then day, then evening, in that order. It's rather confusing, and it's hard to tell exactly what time it is.

4428223

Day can refer to the entire 24 hour unit, not just the bright half. Evening would probably be the better word, though.

Wut. I totally thought she was going to propose. Not commit dessert heresy...

4428288 Sorry about that.

This was a fantastic bedtime story! Thank you Surry! :pinkiehappy::heart:

Soo much YAY. :twilightsmile:

their tummies were full

This seems... unprofessional.

4431267 Seeing as I'm not a professional, I don't get what the problem is.

4431475 I'll give you that. Nevertheless, I know I'm not the only one who sees it that way. If consider changing it, but it's up to you.

Surry wrights another awesome story while I'm unable to continue my terrible one.
Nice job though, I totally thought Twi was gonna propose.

4431491 Sorry, but I've changed enough things about my stories for my readers, and I think I'm gonna' let this one slide. I appreciate your input, though.

4431532 What's sad is... I have another one coming out tonight...

She's my cherry pie cool drink of water such a sweet surprise
Tastes so good make a grown man cry sweet cherry pie
She's my cherry pie put a smile on your face
Ten miles wide Looks so good
Bring a tear to your eye Sweet cherry pie

4428202 you beat me to it...:fluttercry:

4432190 He does that. A lot.

4432199 m'kay. I'll upvote that comment.

4432199 thriller guy laugh and joker
So awesome!:rainbowkiss:

4432163 for some reason, I can't help but notice how perfectly your avatar fits with that comment...

4428202 Dam it I was going to do that.

4432330 Yes, I love my avi.

They each took their bite, and let the sweet, tangy flavors coalesce and run like a river through their mouths. Their dessert was truly amazing, and even better when put together.

Sounds like Heaven isn't too far away... :trollestia:

A.....W...E....S....O...M....E :pinkiegasp:
and really funny :rainbowlaugh:

She's my cherry pie... Damn. Apple hype.

I finally got around to reading this, It's another good story Surry.:twilightsmile:

Nice.
Great Story, too bad Twi didn't propose though.
I though it was cumcoming..
Never mind that was a horrible pun.

Awwwwwwwwww! Twily's being nice. Dashie's eating a lot of sugar. So where's Pinkie? Have a like and a fav, Surry. You are one of the great TwiDash authors out there.

A little confused, why did Twilight not want Rainbow to have the sundae? Unhealthy? or mess up her dress? idk either way I loved it though

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