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This story is a sequel to A Wind in the Petunias


A wind in the petunias is among my father and I's last shared memories.

My name is Lily Valley, and doctors tell me I suffer from anxiety disorder. Gardening helps me feel better, which is why I'm such a good gardener. I already got my cutie mark a year ago, and I'm only eleven! Now I just gotta write this stupid essay.


Part of the Petunia Cycle

1. Romance
2. Tragedy
3. Sad
4. Dark
5. Comedy
6. Random
7. Crossover
8. Adventure
9. Slice of Life
10. Alternate Universe
11. Human
12. Anthro

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Comments ( 7 )

I really like this Lily and I'd love to see more of her!

I came to this expecting something funny (well, not THIS, at least), given the sheer amount of petunia stories you appeared to have lying around.
I left satisfied with what I'd read, even if it hadn't been what I was expecting.
Good on you.

5073320 Glad you enjoyed! If you expand the description, you'll see I have written a comedy about petunias.

It's a nice little story, but a few things are just a bit off. First, which isn't really big, because it's not 100% confirmed or denied, is that it's generally accepted that Lily, Rose, and Daisy are sisters. Second, which is much bigger, is that your description of Lily's cutie mark is wrong in that she has 3 lilies instead of the one you said.

6062021 herp derp. Thanks for pointing that out. I will go change that cutie mark description when I have the chance, which is not right now. Thanks! :)

Wow. This is how you write around a war.

This just make me even more curios about the full story.

6432205 thank you! Yes there will be a much more direct look ad the war when i get around to writing it.

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