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This story is a sequel to A Wind in the Petunias


The wind rustles these newly-planted petunias.

I was tending to them today, when the most peculiar creature popped into my garden. We were both quite shocked.


Part of the Petunia Cycle

1. Romance
2. Tragedy
3. Sad
4. Dark
5. Comedy
6. Random
7. Crossover
8. Adventure
9. Slice of Life
10. Alternate Universe
11. Human
12. Anthro

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 22 )

Awww that was a very cute and touching story. Good job :)

This is actually pretty good. Interesting to see a story about something like this, which seems quite original. Glad to see you pulled it off well and I hope that many others enjoy this as I did.

4341230 thank you very much Warthog. About a week ago, I came up the idea for the petunia cycle at 2 in the morning, and the prompt I gave myself for this one was: What if twilight botched a spell and sent Applejack to the human world for five minutes?

Whats your opinion of orchids?

4344767 I am quite fond of them. My family has a lot of them, they really are marvelous plants. So very varied in their color, shape, and presentation, and quite hardy too.

4345312

You might enjoy reading Nero Wolfe by Rex stout. The man raises a greenhouse of them. Often the narrator (Archie) will go into a monologue about them in the middle of the story. Helps to put into tiny details when Stout himself raised orchids

..... what is this? a ton of stories with the exact same name and most of them don't even have 1 chapter?!:ajbemused:

4673846 I'm working on writing them. Currently, five of the twelve are published.

The story you're linking to both in the description as a sequel to this and in-story has no chapters.

4679041 I know. I need to hurry up and finish writing it.

4679169 You should have published all of them at once, all finished, instead of baiting views for things that aren't even there yet. THAT is what you should've done.

4680924 you're right. However, I suffer from a horrible lack of patience combined with a horrible lack of dedication when it comes to writing. It takes me forever to get anything written, but once I do I want to put it out there immediately. It's why I've stopping doing multiparters, because I start then never finish them, it's why I never use prereaders, because I want to immediately publish what I've written, and it's why this petunia cycle was originally supposed to be written in 12 days, then in a month, then by everfree northwest, now I just hope I'll finish it someday. I have ideas for all of them, I just need to actually write them down, and there's the rub. I assure you I'm not trying to view bait, just show what's coming next.

4680997 I see... You're forgiven this time. :trixieshiftleft:

...Is this series supposed to go in a circle?

Good jolly. This was sentimentally good.

5760427 I'm glad you enjoyed it!

PresentPerfect
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This wasn't bad, but I'll admit to being a little confused by the tone. So many spots in this feel like your standard silliness, but it's obvious you were being serious, if bemusing, about the whole thing.

6721647 Interesting. I'll try to look out for incongruent tone shifts in the future. Thanks for the observation.

I reviewed this story in Read It Later Reviews #41.

My review can be found here.

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