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4367416 And it gets better! And more fast. And because of it going so fast.. there will be problems in the future. Many... many problems...
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so true
I love it! Although it seems to be a bit rushed but other than that its a great story.
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you too! And I agree I'm turning it back down to a slow pace. Though that may get thrown out for a bit when Ark goes to see everyone else! But I fully intend to keep it slow and steady... I have a lot of things I need to get done and I have a lot of time to do it in. Everything has changed! No more shall we go indecisive!
I'm not taking off my par-And there off
Dash SUCK IT
4528929 No. I can see how you'd think that, but that was just a case of an orgy. Though a really small one.
I can see you love sexual innuendos. Hell I do to, but this is clearly staged to me as a seasoned reader though you dressed it up nicely.
I can't blame a healthy, sexy anthro mare for wanting to mount the first strong guy with a big dick can I? Nope.
Instafaved and liked
Not sure if this is a case of PWP, but I'm just gonna indulge myself.
CONGRATULATIONS! I have included your story in my daily fix routine!!! Sex sex sex hot sex. Yep, what any guy wants.
Clop clop clop...no wait this is fap fap fap. Either way, disregarding the lack of depth in this plot and the rush to third base I'm well pleased (still saying this is PWP so I can enjoy this). Though you don't need to put "Nnnng" over 9000 times and the dotdotdots are also over 9000 which is not necessary. Dotdotdots are nice when used sparingly but as for the sputtering and the beat in between moments like you have done are good...just don't do it so much like you did in this chapter. There are more efficient ways to convey sputtering or nervousness which cause a character to stumble on his/her own words.
But I get it. I still enjoy it nonetheless. Makes it much less cringeworthy since I understand why you put so much dotdotdots.
Overall, much better than the average fimfic which is a very good thing.
Medieval times have different customs concerning courtship...I buy this so far.
Breeding hound. Gotta make more innuendos on that.
Also, you could have rationalized that Twilight's dream of Ark cheating and leaving mirrors how much she cares for him and her fear of losing him which is completely healthy and expected of a successful, long-term relationship.
Still going strong.
“Why can’t you be both cute and beautiful?” I asked, sliding my hands further down her body.
“I guess I can make an acception… this once.” She smiled, shivering slightly.
*exception
I suppose the female desire to bear children got the best of Ark. Heh, I hear the ball and chain buddy and it's coming for you!!
No shit XD
Don't ya know that lust can turn to love? True that is taking the fast lane but hey it's worked before. *shrugs*
Medieval times and customs...yep.
Personally I don't see Ark as the polygamy type, but whatever.
Keep it coming!
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4540812 The fez was my idea.
4540825 Yes. Yes it was. And I thank you for all of your ideas good sir.
Not sure how I feel about this chapter...
Oh well ONWARDS!!
4551710 If it's about Celestia's... feature. That wasn't my idea and I won't be doing it again... the other version... was much sweeter and shorter. Trust me though there will be a lot of development before the coronation... and subsequent surprises that occur during it.
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Oh, ok then. For teh lulz? XD
4551793 Pretty much. XD Annnd We have a major new thing coming up... I mean... Alicorn Twilight has to have more then just increased magical power right? Heh... Heheh...
Ah I love RPG's don't you?
Has a problem and he knows little about them and really do it right!
First thing you see in this chapter
OK WE GET IT!, SEXUAL ATRACTION!, TWILIGHT LIKES IT BIG!, BUT COME ON!!!!, AT LEAST TRY BEING SUBTLE!!!!!
I know is mature-sex, "still not read everything", but if you are going yo just make a clopfic out of this then dont bother too much with backstory and such.
wow they really love trying new things
Oh my Celestia! This just keeps getting better and better! Plz update soon
Ouch poor Ark and he cant seem to remember the last time someone he new appeared and turned out to be an assassin
Are you planning on finishing this story?
5157630 I intend to. I just had the finishing idea for it and it's going to be a good one.
5159330 okay
hope to hear from this story soon 
Somebodies been watching Doctor Who
OWWWWWWN MIIIIIIII GOOOUUUUD ITS BEGINS AGAIN
..*jingle theme in back ground*
CLOP CLOP CLOP CLOPPY CLOPY CLOP. CLOPCLOPCLOP CLOOOOP
Oh great hes dead. Much surprise. Such fun. Many feels.
A dying ember can spark into a raging flame at any time and the fuel for such flame can be anything even pure hatred and anger
ERMURGURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRD!
HOW DID I MISS THIS UPDATE! I'M BLIND!
ok a little fast dont you think? love and sex that fast a little too fast for me.
8070134 This was started years ago, I do think it went too fast in the beginning, I'm going to avoid that in future stories now.
This...this is the best burn I've ever read
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Yeah. *Shrugs* Lets go with that, and that I'm not just incompetent... I like the first option a whole lot better. XD
I applaud this work art!! Fantastic Story!!!!
Just found this... interesting story. I hope I don’t regret this...
I regret, good bye.
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Eeeh, you might? IDK it's heavily clop and not a real indication of what I feel is my best work. It changes up towards the end when I took full reign of it and wanted to make it into a series. There's a lot of things i just let slide that won't happen in anything later in this series. If you have any questions on anything go ahead and ask, I'll answer when I see them and get the time to answer.
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Honestly, it's really no surprise. This really isn't a story of mine I'd ever recommend. If I ever get the inkling to, I'll re-write it on my own. But for now it's sadly going to remain the way it is.
Laying it on a little thick unless she's in heat in which case well played sir