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Before I read this, what is the Gore and Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

and AFTER THE PROLOGUE is there more ?

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It'll be marked in chapter titles. Light, being more battle styled blood and gore... no explicit descriptions. Mild being well, some descriptions. And if it says Heavy, expect brutality, full gore and such. For now, I don't intend to go above mild. At least not for a while. Most of the gore for a while will just be past events. It won't be a focus in the story, don't worry. It's just there as a 'just in case' so the story didn't get pulled for having a touch of gore in some chapters.

The Dark tag is simply there because of darker topics, gore (I think it's a half decent tag warning combo), and other things that'll come up later. I'm not a big fan of getting overly gory, taking it as if, I don't like writing it, then it shouldn't be written in my story. But that's gore for gore's sake. The gore I intend to keep as battle/fight things, it won't be there as gross out material, it's there to describe how bad the battle was, or how serious the injuries were.

It's kind of sad that there isn't more comments but I really am enjoying this story. Especially if you will continue to build it. It already has some great foundation work. I'm excited to see just where and what you're going to do with this story. Keep up the awesome work!

I'll post this story in a few of my discord chats when relevant, this story deserves a bit more recognition than it has.

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Well, thank you. I have no intentions on killing this story off, just taking a bit of a break from both my major stories. Once I'm feeling ready to write for this again updates will be coming whenever I've finished with them.

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Well I hope this story gains traction with other readers, glad to be at the start of a story for once.

I'm very sorry, but I'm not sure the story's going to be for me. See, I absolutely hate the noble-bashing trope so prevalent among fanfics, which often extends to Blueblood. And, well, it's happening here too.

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I'm sorry you feel that way. I don't intend for it to be a major part of the story. It was just used here for plot advancement, and later on for it to be referenced as a bit of remorse for them acting that way. This was just them being 'out of touch' with the general populace, and when major things happen later on, they begin to grow more savvy, and less assinine in later stories. I had plans later for a story involving Blueblood. Possibly as a side story to this one. It's just a far, far too easy a trope to use, and part of me is ashamed of using it.

Most of this story isn't going to be taking place in Equestria even. I'm just prepping things, like Chrysalis and Tharian having a common complaint to bond off of. And of course coming up soon, a bit of Blueblood being humble and admitting he's being pressured into acting like a right damn cunt. I won't focus on the unnamed nobility. As the main characters in this story are Chrysalis, Celestia, and Tharian. I do thank you for bringing up my use of the trope it is a very shallow one, and one I intend to push away from in this series.

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That's a noble sentiment, pardon the pun. At this point, I could explain why I dislike the trope so much, but from your answer, it seems like you already know the reasons.

Wait i saw the name arkantos, if this is the arkantos from Age of Mythology then by all that excists i will like this.

But first i need to read the prequel

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