The Red Chronicler
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Love halo crossover so I'll definitely stick around for this.
There is one character that I plan on having in the story, who's original creator being Pen Stroke. I've already sent him a message asking if I could use his character Nyx in my story so that way I could have something that will make sense for my next story. It will tie in with what Lord Darkus had done to Luna in Ch 3 of 'Touch of Darkness,' and what the side effects were when he corrupted the lunar princess. It will certainly make for a very interesting story considering it includes characters that have been stuck in my head for over ten years. Though I'm mostly a little paranoid about getting writers block if I use Pen Stroke's character without asking him first. I'm going to wait for him to respond before I start the third chapter, as it will introduce Nyx. I've also have some other random things happen in that chapter as well, some of which might make you wonder exactly what goes on in my head.
I love the story so far! I love halo and I love MLP, so that's good for me! Please continue!
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Thanks. And I hope you two enjoy what I have in store. It will be awesome.
Edit: I have added the sex tag as there will be a scene of that near the end of the story.
Well what id love to see happen is that there is no other Human on Equestria and he has to make do on the planet. I also hope that he runs in to Luna or Celestia and points a gun at them and like... Few its just a horse. "Im a pony" HOLY SHIT DID THAT THING JUST TALK!
4962065 I won't say that anything like that is going to happen, but there will be some rather interesting things that will happen latter in the story. There will be a point near the end of the story where you guys will get to see some action, but that is going to be a surprise.
I've already got chapter 3 done, but I want to wait 'till I get a response from Pen Stroke to see if I could use his character, Nyx, since I have her mentioned in the chapter. Once I've gotten confirmation I'll put out the chapter, I'm not going to put it out until I'm sure that I won't end up getting in trouble for putting someone else's character in my story without their permission. Hopefully I'll be able to get the chapter out and work on the next one, so you may have to wait until then.
4962799 Haha allright hope he meets luna and see what she thinks of him lol good louk
Hehehe ramerez[youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=PkuLj5uCgSk]
4966307 I see that you caught one of the easter eggs that I had put in the story.
its good so far.. though i think it would be better off without the other... "people" just the ODST and the ponys it would make for a better story but its up to you really!
4967944 There's a reason they're there. Though you wont see them very often, they will pop up every now and again. But I promise that I'll keep it focused mostly on the main characters.
4967950 All right thats cool to know i was thinking aswell since he was an ODST and they did most of there operations at night from what the story of Halo told me but i have a feeling Luna will take a bit of interest in to him
If i am correct... it wont be Episode 1 of Season 1 or 2 so im gonna guess around 3-5? anyways goodjob! i love it now when i heard Nyx and she said that she looked like nightmare moon then it hit me right in the face i was like OHHHH NOW I KNOW WHO SHE WAS! keep it up dude im loving this so far!
Edit: You said you started with this story... well since it had nightmare moon in it id guess Episode... 2 since youknow the elements!
4974031 Thanks. It's always a pleasure to see these kinds of comments for one of my first time stories. It fills me with happiness when I hear that. But sorry to say you're a little bit off on which episode this story first takes place. May I suggest rereading the chapter 'Wandering the Castle.' You may be surprised about what you may find.
Ah shit. Not the flood...
4975768 Don't worry, they've been taken care of. Mabye.
4974115 I thought that at first... when they had to go back in to the castle... WAIT... at the end of the episode there was a shadow of sorts... which is not pinkie because she was leaving the castle... so that must mean that was nyx right
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4976512 Sorry, but you're still way off on which episode this takes place. Try and think of when the mane six found the Elements of Harmony.
4977188 hmm it must be 1 or 2 but im still confused lol
4977819 Once I get the next chapter in, you'll be able to tell immediately. Unless someone else figures it out first.
4978400 hm... allright well i read through the castle chapter again.. but i could not seem to find it ah well they did mention return of nightmare moon...
OHH GRAND GALLOPING GALA! now it makes sence... or im just wrong again. Great job btw
4981044 Basically, the story starts off near the end of episode two of season one. The latest chapter is based on events from episode 3. Expect some more like this in future chapters, along with some that will be in between.
I know of another fic that has started off on the first episode of the tv series, though I've never seen them continue on it. That fic, which is The Mary Test Dairies, Episode 1: Where am I? Part 1 byMathewSwift, is one of the things that had inspired me to write this story.
4981084 Epic
Fix it (Why Everyone? not Pony?)
Btw, nice story.
4981883 Oh, wait what! Where did I make that mistake. Please tell me the chapter so I may fix it ASAP.
4982635 You shall read you story again to make sure
it perfect
I went back and reread through the chapters for any errors that were made when I had transferred the story from Microsoft Word onto here. I've also made some minor tweaks to said chapters. Hopefully I've addressed any and all errors that were on the chapters.
I can't wait to read about the princesses reactions when they find out they invited a killing expert soldier to the gala.
4988764 Well, I'll try and not disappoint. But what you should really be looking for is when he meets Discord. That's going to be a fun one to write.
4989634 hahaha, he meets discord?!?! (John De Lancie would be proud).
4994412 Yes. If you haven't already noticed, some of these chapters will have the episodes from the show be integrated into the story. I know I am not going to be the first one to do this, for there are others that have already done this, but I will do my best to make it work and make it hilarious at the same time.
4994808 I salute you.
4981084 When are u going to finish this!!!!!!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?
5139936 Sorry, sorry, sorry. I've been a little distracted, okay I've been really distracted lately. I decided to take a bit of a break after one of my total failures that I had written, but I guess I took too long of a break. I'll get right onto writing the next chapter soon, hopefully I'll get it done before I end up with more comments of more people wanting more.
5141831 You get a moustache and my sincere condolences
Great tale btw :)
5032247 Love the id pic!!!!! (A6M2C Zero against a bunch of horses with wings = no challenge for the zero pilots!!!)
5143772 Thanks
The next chapter is going to take place on the Applebuck Season episode. I'm certain that it will take a while for me to do it, but I think it will come out hilarious. There will be some parts of the episode that will not be included in the chapter, as I had done with the last one.
I also already have ideas on what the next story will be, but that would be spoilers. I wont tell you guys what will happen in that story, but I will tell you that there will be some tragic moments, and maybe a few ponifications. You'll just have to wait and bear with me once I've gotten the story finished, which will actually take a while since it's going to go up to the last episode of season two of the show. Anyway, thanks for reading and sorry again for the long wait. I'll be sure to entertain you with the next chapter.
5144127 Looking forward to it,so send me a mail to me fimbox plz!!!
5144144 Uh... I'm not sure how to do that. I'm still new to all of this, not just with writing stories.
BIIIIIIIIG THUMBS UP from me!!!!
5188173 Glad you're enjoying it.
hm not bad i guess
AND everything screw up.
5274541 I'm gonna guess that was lyra who took the armor... God fucking damnit lyra!
5279705 Yeah...Walk around in nake with Towel? No armor.
But still it mature story.
erm, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are my guesses
*clap clap clap* i like where this is going!