OHH GRAND GALLOPING GALA! now it makes sence... or im just wrong again. Great job btw

4981044 Basically, the story starts off near the end of episode two of season one. The latest chapter is based on events from episode 3. Expect some more like this in future chapters, along with some that will be in between.

I know of another fic that has started off on the first episode of the tv series, though I've never seen them continue on it. That fic, which is The Mary Test Dairies, Episode 1: Where am I? Part 1 byMathewSwift, is one of the things that had inspired me to write this story.

4981084 Epic

everyone

hello/

Fix it (Why Everyone? not Pony?)
Btw, nice story.

4981883 Oh, wait what! Where did I make that mistake. Please tell me the chapter so I may fix it ASAP.

4982635 You shall read you story again to make sure
it perfect

I went back and reread through the chapters for any errors that were made when I had transferred the story from Microsoft Word onto here. I've also made some minor tweaks to said chapters. Hopefully I've addressed any and all errors that were on the chapters.

I can't wait to read about the princesses reactions when they find out they invited a killing expert soldier to the gala.

4988764 Well, I'll try and not disappoint. But what you should really be looking for is when he meets Discord. That's going to be a fun one to write.

4989634 hahaha, he meets discord?!?! (John De Lancie would be proud).

4994412 Yes. If you haven't already noticed, some of these chapters will have the episodes from the show be integrated into the story. I know I am not going to be the first one to do this, for there are others that have already done this, but I will do my best to make it work and make it hilarious at the same time.

4994808 I salute you.

4981084 When are u going to finish this!!!!!!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?

5139936 Sorry, sorry, sorry. I've been a little distracted, okay I've been really distracted lately. I decided to take a bit of a break after one of my total failures that I had written, but I guess I took too long of a break. I'll get right onto writing the next chapter soon, hopefully I'll get it done before I end up with more comments of more people wanting more.

5141831 You get a moustache and my sincere condolences Great tale btw :)

5032247 Love the id pic!!!!! (A6M2C Zero against a bunch of horses with wings = no challenge for the zero pilots!!!)

5143772 Thanks

The next chapter is going to take place on the Applebuck Season episode. I'm certain that it will take a while for me to do it, but I think it will come out hilarious. There will be some parts of the episode that will not be included in the chapter, as I had done with the last one.

I also already have ideas on what the next story will be, but that would be spoilers. I wont tell you guys what will happen in that story, but I will tell you that there will be some tragic moments, and maybe a few ponifications. You'll just have to wait and bear with me once I've gotten the story finished, which will actually take a while since it's going to go up to the last episode of season two of the show. Anyway, thanks for reading and sorry again for the long wait. I'll be sure to entertain you with the next chapter.

5144127 Looking forward to it,so send me a mail to me fimbox plz!!!