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Cute! I really love this, the only thing I can say is maybe add a bit more plot? But anyway it's good!!

Can you already see the hordes of crabs marching through the streets of Canterlot?

Nice Fluffle Puff refrence.

What the fuck did I just read? It was strange, somewhat decently written clop, but baring the unfortunate stiches of a rushed work. Implied pedophilia, too. Out of curiosity, I'll fav this and read the rest over time in adherence to my rule of faving, but keep in mind I'm being nice. Also, this line.
“Then let's cum together as a sign of our love!”
...What.

Huh. So, so far in the list of clop-types in this story, there's lesbianism, pedophilia, incest, and polyamory. Let's see how many more we can add by the end.

Zir

kind of awkward, but i'll keep reading,
also, indentation, ya need some

Zir

i really enjoy the humor in this story,

nice but rushed work need a remake

Well, now they know who did it and can kill Trixie later.:twilightsmile:

4347960 they still don't know if it is actually trixie:moustache:

4349677 Exactly! the same discord who is screwing with them and made sure Cadence could not come to equestria in time:moustache::eeyup:

he didn't exactly lie, anyway they will stone him and Get their revenge on the one who gave discord the Idea's.

I say, when they find Trixie, they'll wrap her up nicely with ribbons and chains and send her to the changeling empire as a peace offering. There she can work as broodmare to replace all the little changelings that were squished during the battle.

well I always knew I hated discord for a reason.:facehoof: good story though,:pinkiehappy:

Discord needs to get hammered in the ars by Celestia's big dick, then Trixie.:twilightsmile:

Give 'em a taste of there own medicine.:twilightangry2:

Uh, discord you just fucked up.:facehoof:

please tell me this is going to end happy, cause I wont be able to read further unless I know Dash and Twilight are going to be ok.....and separated.

4439403 I promise it will all work out, although one or two of our beloved ponies or other creatures might not be happy with the end results.

Does this guard canter-a-lot?

*Godzilla emerges from the ocean* Yep, we're doomed.

I'm beginning to question wether or not I'm reading this for the plot, the "plot", or the comedy.

I beg, I plead you really need to write more. this has given me laughter and joy

If anyone has suggestions on how the sequel should go, please let me know.
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well as all sequels go we need to know what happens after the ending, but to make it, more than just an expanded epilog so there should be a new problem that is a direct course from the first story, i guess that a problem whit how the hole issue was handled cud rise as a result like the nobels rising up over the fact that there is going to be so many new royals they need to pay to .... or have some secret group of sun worshiping ponies to try to banish discord becourse they think that he is trying to bring more chaos in to the world

“Okay pretty lady,”

“Okay luv you!”

:rainbowlaugh: Oh god she was just like Mindy from Animaniacs!:rainbowlaugh:

“I think Nightmare Moon is getting all wet,”

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my little dizzy (discord) is growing up :fluttercry:

4451626 in Luna's words "ZING!":trollestia:#random mustache:moustache:

Comment posted by nalfordschlomer deleted Dec 9th, 2016

I agree with AndersJager about how the sequel should go but also add how the princesses and Dash will handle taking care of three foals.

This deserves that random tag.

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