Over in just 5k words after that 17th chapter? D: I need to get home and read this >< OH MY GAWD IT'S COMPLETE! AND YOU DID IT! GRATS on the 50k words NaNo challenge you took on!

Jeez. Even after reading it through a second time... it's like, done? This felt like a nice end to a Book 1 or ? series. And just when you get that really sweet cover to go with this epic. I do hope to read more of these adventures someday.

Man, this felt more like a bonus chapter, like Fate/Stay Night's 00 episode. You get the whole other character's POV over the main ones showing events we didn't get to see through the others. When taken in like that, I guess 17 really was more of "THE END" with this being the Bonus Chapter. It hurts to see the story just END. Like, flip a light switch at that very end. Good chapter, but darn if I wasn't hoping for it to reveal a few extra scenes that only Spike would know. Such a tease ending it this way.

But yeah, wow. It was really fun following the story all the way through. Book Two hopefully will be a thing. If and When I sure hope to be around for it!

Btw, can't recall if earlier chapters spoke of Sweetie Belle, but it almost felt like a plausibility that she was given a window of potential future appearance, maybe. That was a nice little subtle bit there if Sweetie ends up actually being alive or I just forget she got zombified earlier chapters. :P

I liked it... After I begin to read I could not stop but still many questions without answer...

Who did this?

How this happened?

Where is Celestia?

Is Luna really alive? And if so... What is she doing?

Where is Discord? We can assume that he is reformed and he could very well have enough power to do something and if Spike was unnafected maybe others could be unnafected

and the biggest question...

ARE YOU GOING TO MAKE A SEQUEL?

6672769 Pleasure to see that you enjoyed it. The cover debacle was more of an accident. I commissioned it a year ago, but then there was this whole mental illness thing on my end and work on their end and it only got done right as I was finishing up. Still worth it, though. If I do a sequel, I'll try to get the cover first, though.

The chapter was meant to show that Twilight really didn't know all that much about what was going on. How could she? She was basically cut off from any source of information and going off into the world appeared too dangerous to be pulled off. That and I wanted to show just why she would even considering murdering her friends to save everyone, since that is pretty much the opposite of how she'd act in the show.

As for Sweetie. Who knows, but I do want to leave as many doors open as I can. Because that allows me to strategically murder everyone in later fics.

6691933 Thanks, the unanswered questions are deliberate, though. This whole story is like a spin-off to a story I haven't written until this point. It'll come out, on a different account, due to it not being a fetish fic, at some point in the future. That'll answer probably most of the important questions.

But I do kind of want to do a sequel for this. Otherwise doing the whole thing with RD and them setting out would be pointless. I haven't got an idea what to do as of yet, but maybe in a year or so. Until then, I've got plenty of other stuff to do. I'll just be shameless and say that maybe you'll also find my other stories enjoyable.

6698626 If you don't have a idea, maybe you can begin with searching for answers, collect many of the questions, think a answer and connect the dots.

Wow I have no words to describe the feels for this fic . It amazing really glad I finally finished it .

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Any plans for the sequel or some continuation?

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You think I'm a coward? Also, the sentence

"Though I still think you of you and others as coward"

makes no sense.