Loss of control over some bodily functions due to a traumatic event or something I guess I can understand, but the thing with Apple Bloom, her paci, and the pain... That's weird.

This fic is weird. I'm not into any of the diaper stuff (I've stumbled upon some pictures on derpibooru, and that's about it), so maybe I don't understand why there is so much focus on infantilism in the story, but I'd like to see more of the world, some explanations and generally some other stuff than just Apple Bloom being a baby.

Hey, author. Could you explain to me what's up with the diapers? Almost all of your favorites have something to do with those. It's not a sexual fetish, right?

4963992 Considering the lack of a sex tag in this fic, it most certainly isn't a sexual fetish. That much I can say for sure.

You have the uncanny ability to write something truly messed up, but then something light hearted at the end of this chapter...

4963992 In it's core it could be, just look abdl info, I guess, I'm not 100% sure he his one, most padded writers are though,
as for the world, I get a feeling of fallout Equestria.

4963992 Well, it's a fetish for me, and this is my fetish account.

Chronologically speaking this piece of fiction is the second of a slew of stories playing in one big alternate universe. It's also the only piece in this verse with fetish material, and even then, it's supposed to be somewhat disturbing, because what AJ and Apple Bloom have here isn't a healthy relationship, it's just one insane pony driving another pony down over the edge. That said, the status quo will be shaken up over the course of the story, so you won't get a mass of chapters that are just indulging the fetish. Instead, shit is going to go down.
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I'm primarily writing a story about two sisters, who, despite themselves, try to survive in a fallen world. I see the fetish, especially this particular one, as a gimmick that is both creepy and endearing. If AJ would chain up Apple Bloom against her will, it'd just be creepy instead, for example. Either way, I want to play this as emotionally strong as I can, as to make the ride worthwhile to anyone who attempts to read, and not just the fetish crowd.

I hope that makes some sense. If you got into this story despite not getting the fetish, then you certainly have my admiration. If you want to drop it, knowing it's a fetish fic, I'll understand completely. Either way, I hope I could give some explanation as to what the hell I'm doing here.

4964283 I think I don't want the crowd that comes with a tag combination of Apple Bloom, Applejack and sex.

4965345 We can't be dark and edgy all the time, some levity is always needed, and I don't want the next chapter to be more angsting around. It'd get tiring after a while.

4967416 Well, we haven't seen much of the world, so the only statement I'll make is that it doesn't involve Fallout. I created the premise behind this story, and I hope that it'll be able to stand on its own four hooves.

4967546 Are you saying you see this fetieh as a gimmick in the context of your story? Or in general?

It's interesting. Your writing style in this is something akin to a stream-of-consciousness style.

But still, I want to see more of the post-apoc world.

4967546 If you say that some shit is about to go down, I'll continue reading. The relationship between AJ and AB disturbs me, and anything that disturbs me has my attention, so I'll continue reading regardless.

By the way, Applejack and Apple Bloom have possibility of doing a mega super fucked up thing together - inbred rape incest pedophilia (if I were politically incorrect, I would highlight homosexualism too). And that's the biggest combo that I put together without going to even more kinky stuff.

4967931 I don't think any of that's going to happen. The worst that's likely going to happen is that Apple Bloom is going to up end completely diaper dependent.

4967546 you say it's not fallout, but the bombs, end of world, gouls, insanity, ect, ect, ect, ect prove other wise,
also this story make me

4967603 In the context of the story. It's hard writing a story like this with infantilism in it, mainly because the themes clash so hard, but making something like this work is half the fun in being a writer.

4967645 Thank you. I like to think that I've got my characters figured out, if nothing else, and drawing out how they view the world is great fun.

4967931 I was considering to add themes of incest on top of it all in the very first draft, but I have enough ways to twist it without doing anything sexual. Also, I think writing Applejack properly into having sex with her sister would require her to break really bad, and I don't think I've provided the context for that to happen.

4970187 Well, she kinda is as of this chapter. So, hurray for that?
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4971568 Except there exists nobody able in the MLP-universe with the capability of building bombs that tear the fabric of reality a new one. At least to my knowledge.

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Except there exists nobody able in the MLP-universe with the capability of building bombs that tear the fabric of reality a new one. At least to my knowledge.

Discord provides power, Twilight builds a device. What could possibly go wrong?

4992914 Well, at least none of her enemies can see her in her current state, so there's that. Yeah, it's not exactly a consolidation prize, but hey, it's better than nothing.

4992914 wait till CUTIE MARK CRUSADES FIREWORK MAKERS!!!!!! YAY!!!!!

4994556 Well, perhaps that's one good thing about Apple Bloom being stuck in diapers. She and her friends can't blow up the world anymore than it already is.

That was terribly sad. To finally hear what became of them. AJ's condition. The whole flashback with Humphrey.

Dang. That was crazy. I sort of miss the old cover art, but I guess this one shows off the sisterly bond better. That last thing Apple Bloom said got me all teary eyed. This is just a really tensed story.

Rainbow Dash. I wonder if Twilight is okay still...

*glances at the story and then at the description* this is a fettish fic? The story is so dark and f*cked up I can't tell, but I want to stick with it because the story is so twisted despite that this isn't exactly my cup of tea smex wise. Seriously I read te description and thought, gee how messed up can this be? Oh boy my gut is usually right about good grimdarks.

I love the relationship between the sisters here . It may be a dark theme but the dark doesn't over shadow the light in a sens