I made a promise to Pinkie a few days ago. I haven't broken the promise, I just need some time to keep it. Pinkie also made a promise to me. I just haven't been there for her to fulfill it yet. We finally kept our promises, and now I'm starting a weekly vlog on YouTube. I don't care if people think it's just camera effects, I'll do a livestream one day and prove those people wrong. But the first step is to teach Spike how an iPhone works.
I like it. You get a mustache
Looks interesting, will be following
Be wary of opening the gates to submission suggestions. You risk turning the comments section to a worthless cess pool of increasingly obscure or painfully obvious choices by people, flooding out the comments with any value.
But surely this is already known?
Anyways, this is obviously a self insert, but while they're never grand tales worthy of being on published paper, they can be good. The video log thing being submitted to the Earth internet is what drew me in, but I'm holding out to see if this story goes anywhere else besides the self fantasy and blogging.
This guys environment is relatable, everyone has some element of their life that gives a feeling of hopelessness, but it would've been nice as well to see more of how this guy felt about his depressing outlook on life. Like the funny vs fun part, that was good.
Trackin.
4033964 That's why I asked for them to PM me for suggestions. I'd rather have positive and negative feedback about my story in the comments than some guy's suggestion for the next chapter.
Dude... If these are actually on YouTube... You'll be getting a subscriber.
4039707 I completely agree
4039869 looked at the rating again. Okay, who's getting banged.
4043746 It's only rated teen...which means it only has sex references. Maybe a kissing scene, but that's about as far as it goes.
4043852 oh, Kay then...
....well....i just remembered why i dont like having the same name as people now....fictional or otherwise...
4045633 mine's sorta fictional too...
No complaints
Haha, Vinyl's reaction:
I don't even...
4045662 i'm having flash backs....
I don't understand... Whoever ketchup guy is, he just seems quirky...
4067234 ha, more like:
I don't get it
4122881 it's my bro. There's really nothing to get...
It's funny and weird so I favorited it xD
4173459 I'm only an amateur writer, so it's only natural the story would be funny and weird
Yeah, live streams, from what I've watched on YouTube, are very hard to set up and often the video starts while they're still setting up, so that could give you a couple hundred words of filler if you willing. Then there's of course the questions and argueing.
4174387 I'm actually gonna bracket the livestream website in the next chapter. Also, I added the Twitch account in the description.
Unique.
Much wow.
Wow.
Doge.
Boo! Terrible animation! xD
Swag up, bro. DJ CHANC3 in da house!
hahaha I like this. That would deffinately be spike
I will say this, I started this with the sound of the tv in the background. Since I started reading, I forgot that I was even in my living room hahaha. Love this story so far
4212931 it's a story.
4239623 It's a joke...
4239639meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh
4239659 Meeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh
4293982 lol no. Intriguing idea, but no.
4294034 yeah, he was living with her anyways, and they had a lot of stuff in common. And Spike liked the idea of having a brother like him.
4294067 thanks yes, the grammar is a little shaky, but when you make videos, all you can do is improvise; not base the video off a single script and try to make every single thing perfect. And yes, the youtube vlog idea was quite entertaining to me. That's why I wanted to start this huge cluster of chapters that leads to nowhere but youtube. And even more entertaining to me is the idea of a livestream chapter. I just need 86 more comments--questions, requests, and comments alike--and I'll be able to start the chapter. The fact that I'm asking people for help proves that there won't be a specifically set script.
Basically, thank you for taking the time to read this story.
More, god please more
4317441 sure thing
4317449 ALL MY YES
4474505 not at all just pm me the link to your channel
Needs moar. MOAR
If this was really on youtube, you'd gain a subscriber. As some wierd pony would say AH LAAAAAV THIS!!!
I'LL HELP THE LIVESTREAM!!! I do actually have a real channel called Fennekin Films. So yeah...
5372725 I'm actually thinking of remaking this story. I would've appreciated some help, but I guess I was too lazy to ask
The reboot is coming soon, everyone. Stay tuned.