How to Relax

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When Applejack and Pinkie Pie go to the beach for their first vacation as a couple they find that they have different ideas on what makes a good vacation. One pony wants to relax, one pony wants to party. When another pony shows up to show Pinkie Pie a good time, how will Applejack handle it?

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Story number 4 of my Weekly Romance Challenge
Story 1-Fluttershy/Rarity
Story 2-Fluttershy/Twilight Sparkle
Story 3-Fluttershy/Pinkie Pie

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Esle Ynopemos

Esle Ynopemos #1 · Feb 15th, 2014 · 2 · ·

"Pillow fight!"

Aww.

Another cute one. It feels right in character for AJ to feel like she has to prove something when she really doesn't, and it's really an important lesson for couples to learn that they don't have to enjoy all of the same things to enjoy each other.

There were a few grammar errors and typos ("across" is accidentally duplicated in the first paragraph), but this was a nice, sweet Apple Pie.

randomsurprise

randomsurprise #2 · Feb 15th, 2014 · 1 · ·

hmm... u know i havn't really sunk my teeth into many fics yet but, i enjoyed this all t same

SleepIsforTheWeak

SleepIsforTheWeak #3 · Feb 15th, 2014 · 2 · ·

Dat ending.

flutterdash1

flutterdash1 #4 · Feb 15th, 2014 · · ·

3947658
Thanks ^.^ And it just goes to show that no matter how many proofreaders and editors and revisions and double-checking, things ALWAYS slip through the cracks @.@

3947884
I never sunk my teeth into any Pinkie Pie shipping before I started this project =p Its surprising how romantic she can be <3

3948270
Yup xD

randomsurprise