Princess Twilight Sparkle and Stare Master Fluttershy go on a date to the park. Under the stars and moon, they have a picnic and Fluttershy teaches Twilight the basics of flying.
Part Two of my Weekly Romance Fic Challenge
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All around, that was a great read! The romantic moments were tender and fluffy, the exposition was enough to set up the date, and the story wrapped up with a very touching moment.
If anything, the whole "teaching Twilight how to fly" part could have been skipped. Perhaps that was used to symbolically show Fluttershy teaching Twilight to free herself?
Anyways, the story was still well-written and well-paced. Thanks for this small bit of sweetness.
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Thanks ^.^ I can't say why I felt so desiring of the flight lesson but I couldn't leave it out for some odd reason. The story felt empty without it =3 But I'm glad you liked it ^.^
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It came to be a vital part of the piece - and really fits in the story - that comment was more of personal musing.
I can't wait to see your next romance pairing!
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Next is Fluttershy/Pinkie Pie. After that its up to the voters!
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This is going to be freaking adorable!
Another sweet entry to the series. It makes me happy that you've taken on this project.
Adorable and nicely written, too. Definitely going on my Favorites List!
This was definitely a nice read. Nice to read a romance story without angst once in a while. Good pacing, spot-on characterization, and just enough sweet without giving us diabetes.
I can't wait to see what you do next.
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You are all so kind =D Thanks so much! I'll do my best to deliver to your expectations next week =)
This was one of the most adorable things I've read in a while, truly beautiful.
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Thanks =D I work hard on each of my stories, and for this contest in particular I am striving for excellence =)
I really like the story: short, but it gets its point across; romantic, but more cute fluff than mature. Really cute.
“You did ti Twilight! You did it!”
I thought I'd just point out that you put ti instead of it here.
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Obviously, you couldn't leave it out because it was just too gosh-darn cute.
Very lovely
D'awwww! That was adorable!
this story was basically every word i can think of that means cute
yeah, not my ship, but good, i like it, is cute
It's great to see how both ponies know exactly how to make the other feel comfortable around them, Twilight coming prepared to get Fluttershy talking and Fluttershy's less military flying lesson. So cute; I love this story.
I hope you don't mind me reading it...
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I can't believe I have a story reading <3 <3 <3
Thank you so much <3 ;A; Its beautiful
In a word. Beautiful.
This is a really cute story I cried at the end. So happy.
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Not even 30 seconds out the door and something goes wrong. Just your average day in Ponyville.